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sanginmychains

The Dog When The Bell Rings 2/2

Dec 20, 2009 20:37

Part 1 is here

( The Dog When The Bell Rings Part 2/2 )

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kita0610 December 21 2009, 05:13:49 UTC

Oh that was nummy. And awkward. And funny. And hot. So, basically, all the good things about Torchwood. Well done!

sanginmychains December 21 2009, 20:43:36 UTC

Thank you! Yeah, I love how many different things Torchwood is. And I love the combination of awkward and hot. In fic. Oh heck, in real life too.

jantoforever21 December 21 2009, 05:42:12 UTC

Love this!

sanginmychains December 21 2009, 20:44:28 UTC

Thank you!

blue_fjords December 21 2009, 05:48:54 UTC

Instead of going to bed, I read your story. Time well spent! I have to say I really liked Martha in this. Competent and weirded out and friendly and fighting to keep her head. And your Ianto was incredible. Really. I loved how you portrayed the odd and shifting power dynamic between Jack and Ianto and how much understanding also exists between them.

Plus the erotic imagery was full of yowza.

sanginmychains December 21 2009, 20:52:36 UTC

Yay I kept someone up late! That's a wonderful compliment.

Martha stumped me. I got the setup as a prompt, and I first went yay! good prompt! but then I went Oh crap, how do I write Martha? So I'm glad she reads as sufficiently Martha-like.

temporal_witch December 21 2009, 07:12:59 UTC

I cannot tell you how much I love this - my words have left me. Certainly it's one of the most brilliant and well-written fics I've read in a while. Beautifully in character and perfect voicing. The medical details were also quite accurate from what I recall from my days as an EMT.

So - thank you for sharing this gorgeous piece of writing with us. ♥

sanginmychains December 21 2009, 20:58:03 UTC

I'm glad the medical stuff worked. I haven't done any drugs, so I had to research that, and I peppered my friend the ER doc with "okay, say someone comes into the ER having taken way too much E, what might happen? What would you do?" Then I fudged some stuff about how an IV line goes in (needle, remove, then line? there's a cather...somehow?...write around it).

Thank you for the excellent comments, I'm so pleased that you liked this.

oh_my_janto December 21 2009, 08:29:52 UTC

Oh my, this is very good ... every character plays perfectly. (Even Martha!) Complicated and intense. Thank you!

sanginmychains December 21 2009, 20:59:01 UTC

They're all so complicated and messed up, it's a ton of fun to throw them into the soup and see what happens.

Thanks for commenting!