OMG I LOVE YOU AND I CANNOT READ THIS AT THE MOMENT BECAUSE I AM AT SOMEONE ELSE'S HOUSE *weeps*
I am going to read it when I get home and leave a giant ass review that will be filled with my love for you and probably me asking if I can be your chocolate covered pretzel <333
Okay, never mind, I read the first half before my friend dragged me away and I can already say that I am in utter love with how you characterize Yagyuu. The way you write is FUCKING AWESOME and DELICIOUS.
He sees so much of Niou scattered about, like daisy petals ripped off one by one--he loves me he loves me not--that it’s a wonder there’s any left to congregate in one body at all. <-- HOW DO YOU WRITE LIKE THIS?
I am in utter awe and I can't wait to read the rest. I kinda ran back and went, "OMG LET ME READ THIS!" before getting dragged away and now I'm writing really really quickly because I have to go soon and omg I love you and I am babbling.
You are one of my new goddesses. Yes you are <33 Your descriptions, the style of writing you use. I think I am going to die from the utter kickassness of it all. And I am aware that kickassness isn't a word but I do not care because I am stuck in a rapture of BLISS from reading just half of what you wrote and I can't wait to read the rest <33
But I got home and read the second half and I would so bow down if you could see me.
Niou howls, but Yagyuu just smiles, lips skinning back from teeth in a rictus that is as obedient as Kimichi’s is kind, and says, “As you wish."
I weep at this because of how beautifully morbid it is and how wonderfully Yagyuu it is.
How Niou is in his brain, how his voice is almost embedded within his thoughts, I'm left in awe and even more awe at how you do this and I want to cry, but in a good way, because your writing is so fucking good.
Yagyuu.
Smoking.
How I love thee. There are so many ways and so many reasons, they are countless and they are more numerous then the stars in the sky. I am a dork. I am an utter dork and still lolling about and trying to take my jaw off the ground at this fic.
This is what is difficult: wearing charcoal and bloodred on the tennis courts instead of black and yellow
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::sparkles like mad back:: Thank you! You're making me blush. ^_______^;; I'm so glad you liked it, because I wasn't sure it was as good as the first chapter and I had to post it because I'm going to camp tomorrow and whew, SO MUCH RELIEF I LOVE YOU SO.
I'm not exactly the poster child for coherency either, as you can see. :-P
*sparkles and sparkles for you even more* Dude, of course I loved it <333 and not a good first chapter??? Are you kidding me?? That was fucking WONDERFUL <33
Eep~! Camp!! <33 have fun ^__^ *kissues*
Dude, you are more coherent than me xD
& <-- almost a pretzel and now it just needs chocolate xD *gives you some* <3
grepyihpyg9ieur4gwpayuyp9wyh4ray this gives me this crazy sort of ache in my chest and oh there was a lot I liked about this, yes, very much so; if I were to quote favorite bits at you then this review would be very long indeed, so I won't and I will just tell you that waugh this is good.
(and I want so badly for Yagyuu to go home and for everything to be OK but oooo the crazy, it is well written even if it is not a good thing, if you know what i mean)
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I am going to read it when I get home and leave a giant ass review that will be filled with my love for you and probably me asking if I can be your chocolate covered pretzel <333
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He sees so much of Niou scattered about, like daisy petals ripped off one by one--he loves me he loves me not--that it’s a wonder there’s any left to congregate in one body at all. <-- HOW DO YOU WRITE LIKE THIS?
I am in utter awe and I can't wait to read the rest. I kinda ran back and went, "OMG LET ME READ THIS!" before getting dragged away and now I'm writing really really quickly because I have to go soon and omg I love you and I am babbling.
You are one of my new goddesses. Yes you are <33 Your descriptions, the style of writing you use. I think I am going to die from the utter kickassness of it all. And I am aware that kickassness isn't a word but I do not care because I am stuck in a rapture of BLISS from reading just half of what you wrote and I can't wait to read the rest <33
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But I got home and read the second half and I would so bow down if you could see me.
Niou howls, but Yagyuu just smiles, lips skinning back from teeth in a rictus that is as obedient as Kimichi’s is kind, and says, “As you wish."
I weep at this because of how beautifully morbid it is and how wonderfully Yagyuu it is.
How Niou is in his brain, how his voice is almost embedded within his thoughts, I'm left in awe and even more awe at how you do this and I want to cry, but in a good way, because your writing is so fucking good.
Yagyuu.
Smoking.
How I love thee. There are so many ways and so many reasons, they are countless and they are more numerous then the stars in the sky. I am a dork. I am an utter dork and still lolling about and trying to take my jaw off the ground at this fic.
This is what is difficult: wearing charcoal and bloodred on the tennis courts instead of black and yellow ( ... )
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I'm not exactly the poster child for coherency either, as you can see. :-P
Re: chocolate covered pretzel: Hmmmmmm. Chocolate. ::speculates:: ^_________^
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Eep~! Camp!! <33 have fun ^__^ *kissues*
Dude, you are more coherent than me xD
& <-- almost a pretzel and now it just needs chocolate xD *gives you some* <3
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(and I want so badly for Yagyuu to go home and for everything to be OK but oooo the crazy, it is well written even if it is not a good thing, if you know what i mean)
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I AM SPEECHLESS.
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o.o
Whoa.
Thank you very much, dear! :)
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