Comments | sangredulce: P!atD, "Snake Bite"

sangredulce

P!atD, "Snake Bite"

Oct 24, 2007 13:48

Last night, at an unreasonable hour, I offered to write 100 words for deliberatehips to cheer her up. 1218 words later ( Read more... )

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deliberatehips October 25 2007, 03:39:15 UTC

!!! I love this just as much as I did last night (this morning? welcome to 2002!) You still get Brendon so well, your voice for him is perfect. And the bit at the end, how you executed it is just, yes. Yes. I am going to come up with more prompts for you now :)

kickthebeat October 25 2007, 04:12:14 UTC

He sets out alone. He's of hardy pioneer stock, he thinks. His is a manifest destiny, pushing borders and boundaries ever further. He was very good at Oregon Trail II.

i love you more than anyone in the world, the end. hang on, though, i gotta finish.

kickthebeat October 25 2007, 04:16:35 UTC

okay, seriously, let me buy you many drinks when i finally get up there to see you. MANY. and let me know if you need more bootlegged musical items; if pucey cannot supply you with the things you need, i can.

GOD, THIS. your brendon was an absolute delight. the hiking in the wilderness! i love it, i love you, i love it all. a million emo hearts for you, old friend.

sangredulce October 28 2007, 04:12:29 UTC

I need all the drinks I can get!

yay! I am so glad you like it. It is quite a rush to be writing such things again.

babygotbass October 25 2007, 04:35:22 UTC

Hey there - I was sent here to read some good Brendon/Ryan. And yay! It was so much fun.

The lava game is all very well, in its place, but he needs to focus: specifically on the frontier game.

Oh, the hours I spent playing the lava game. This made me smile.

sangredulce October 28 2007, 04:14:08 UTC

Hello! I am glad that you came by. Thanks very much! And yeah, the lava game has few, if any, equals in this world.

*unlurks* gothicwhite October 31 2007, 20:36:36 UTC

My sister totally has a lava shark tattoo on her shoulder.

Re: *unlurks* sangredulce October 31 2007, 20:43:10 UTC

That is pretty sweet. Also, hi!

proteinscollide October 25 2007, 04:41:41 UTC

Awww! I love Brendon, but sometimes his characterisation in fic either errs too much on the side of cute, or too much on the side of hyperactive. I really like how you've written him here, the tangents, the curiosity, his imagination. It's lovely. And your writing is still really beautiful and fluid and I've missed reading it! I'm so glad you're being pulled into this fandom, and I hope you write more soon. =)

sangredulce October 28 2007, 04:15:36 UTC

Hooray--I'm very happy to hear that my initial attempt was in the right direction. I hope I write more soon, too! Thanks for the encouragement. xoxo.