the words flow beautifully and i really do enjoy it
i love the line "The thrill of one last kiss. I was once like the rest, Such life before my eyes, I couldn't have cared less, The descending flurry naught but a nuisance, And silence meant only that I was alone, As one last kiss was another burst of agony."
it shows a lot of emotion
my favorite part is: "So won't you please, be my favorite drug, Pull me close before we must part again And give me a heartfelt kiss of silent snow?"
you are such an amazing writer im jealous <3 i love u
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the words flow beautifully and i really do enjoy it
i love the line "The thrill of one last kiss.
I was once like the rest,
Such life before my eyes,
I couldn't have cared less,
The descending flurry naught but a nuisance,
And silence meant only that I was alone,
As one last kiss was another burst of agony."
it shows a lot of emotion
my favorite part is:
"So won't you please, be my favorite drug,
Pull me close before we must part again
And give me a heartfelt kiss of silent snow?"
you are such an amazing writer im jealous <3
i love u
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