The Drawbacks of Breathing

[saracupcaked]

Part A of The Drawbacks of Breathing can be found here at Geekfiction.

The Drawbacks of Breathing, Part B

Comments

[mad_for_jorja]

Brilliant. Please post again soon.

[saracupcaked]

Thanks! I'm in the midst of writing, so watch out for it :)

[anonymous]

This is Beautifully written

[saracupcaked]

Thank you!

[scullyseviltwin]

This is such a wonderful piece; I simply love the transitions throughout this. how she transforms as a character, and how they come together.

I think the simplicity of how they finally came together was perfect. especially the "not good with words" and his reaction...

Also... "There’s no need for all that
when here she stands,
naked in Grissom’s bathroom,
thoroughly fucked.

So real, so unromanticized, great piece. can't wait for more!!!

[saracupcaked]

The transitions and layout itself was really fun to write, but formatting it onto LJ was a bitch; it took me hours. I'm not complaining though, since it is such a great learning experience.

There has been so many different interpretations of how they got together that I decided to use the simplest way, which fitted perfectly with the layout.

*blush* I actually had a few of your fics in mind while I was writing that bit.

Thanks ♥

[saracupcaked]

Perfect? Wow, thank you.

:)

[caro_gsr]

i liked both parts very much. Your writing is really good and the way you are showing this is interesting...
I hope you keep writing the continuation =)

[saracupcaked]

I wanted to write something different, and not just in content itself. I'm working on part two of this :)

Thanks for the comment!