The Drawbacks of Breathing

May 09, 2009 14:00

Part A of The Drawbacks of Breathing can be found here at Geekfiction.

The Drawbacks of Breathing, Part B

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csikathy May 10 2009, 02:43:43 UTC
Wow. This format is really cool. I love the layout and the detailed but almost shorthand path to the GSR.

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saracupcaked May 10 2009, 10:44:16 UTC
A really well calculated risk I guess, haha. I agree: writing this way seems to give it a powerful but 'bare' feeling, something I think works really well with Grissom and Sara.

Thanks :)

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brookegreene May 10 2009, 05:47:49 UTC
Wow. That was... so... amazing.

See the irony in my icon choice? LOL. Loved the ending. And the title. :)

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saracupcaked May 10 2009, 10:46:55 UTC
Haha, thank you :)

I think my best genre is angst, so I have to write Grissom and Sara surrounded with angst before they can have their 'happy ending' - just like the way TPTB did with canon.

As for the title, it has been something brewing in my head and I've finally found the perfect piece for it.

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HAPPY DANCING.... nickystokes72 May 10 2009, 13:51:43 UTC
i LOVED IT...WAITING FOR MORE...THIS WAS SO EXQUISITELY DONE....

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saracupcaked May 11 2009, 08:58:53 UTC
Thank you :)

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elfling65 May 11 2009, 01:58:12 UTC
Totally amazing! The layout was very different but it added to the whole piece, i think. I can't wait for future work by you.

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saracupcaked May 11 2009, 09:00:58 UTC
Haha, thank you. It was a risk I took, and I'm glad it payed off. I will be continuing with this piece, so keep an eye out for it :)

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saracupcaked May 14 2009, 11:08:21 UTC
Thank you :)

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