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saranghaekiss

doll » ficlet.

Nov 18, 2010 22:00

Doll.
Yunho/Jaejoong.
AU, Angst-ish.
It's Yunho's job to be impartial, but this one doll just catches his eye, it's an unexplained feeling but he's just too beautiful.

Prompt: Doll.

( Tender fingers traced the skin of the porcelain face. Surely not - he thought, the pads of his fingers becoming used to all the lines and the feeling of the face - this is surely not a doll. Surely, no one as beautiful as this would ever need to sell their life for five years to be imprinted with someone else's personality, just to earn some money. )

prompt, pairing / yunho and jaejoong, length / ficlet, genre / angst, genre / au

Comments 20

museelo November 18 2010, 22:37:29 UTC

I'll read this tomorrow~

saranghaekiss November 19 2010, 15:13:12 UTC

Okay, bb~

museelo November 19 2010, 22:00:16 UTC

Changmin is a genius ♥ obvious bias

I really like the way you write, the same as the last thing you wrote. It's really nice and prtty much amazing.

"Running his thumb over Youngwoong's closed eyelids, Yunho breathed out.
He's just like all of the others."
I think Yunho is trying to convince himself...

Thank you for this and sorry for the late reply D;

saranghaekiss November 19 2010, 22:31:34 UTC

Your bias - I feel it. Here, a Changmin icon to match. :D
We all know Yunho's trying to convince himself. //sigh.
Thank you so much for your comment! And late reply is no problem! I might aswell give you your spot myself, you're always here at the top of my entries. :') ♥

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takelo14 November 18 2010, 22:47:12 UTC

SPOT! :)

takelo14 November 18 2010, 22:47:45 UTC

whoa i liked it :) reminds me of a show called dollhouse

saranghaekiss November 19 2010, 15:12:56 UTC

Yep! That was what I first thought of when I saw Doll. ^^
I was planning to make a chaptered story based on Dollhouse. :3
Thank you!

nosy_duck November 18 2010, 23:32:12 UTC

no~ jj is not like the other. haha

saranghaekiss November 19 2010, 15:14:54 UTC

I think Yunho was trying to convince himnself - because I agree with you. ^^

blackcherriess November 18 2010, 23:35:13 UTC

thankyou for sharing something so lovely(: *squishes you* the way you write just takes my breath away! it's so obvious that yunho is attracted to jaejoong and i really enjoy reading this. if you even continue this, it'll definitely be awesome <3

saranghaekiss November 19 2010, 15:16:24 UTC

/squishes you back!
Thank you so much for the lovely comment. :3
Because this is based on a TV show, I thought I'd write a whole fic based on it... the comments are just inspiring me to write it more. ^^
Thank you again!

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saranghaekiss November 19 2010, 15:17:50 UTC

Ah, JJ is a human who gave up his life to become a doll for money - he can be imprinted with personalities to fit a clients needs or wants, so if they need a killer, Changmin will give him a skilled personality to do the job. ^^
I think you understood. :D