Fic: Which Way to Elysian Fields? (Part 2)

Sep 03, 2012 20:58

Title: Which Way to Elysian Fields? (Part 2/2)
Characters: House, Wilson
Rating: R
Summary: House and Wilson return to New Orleans.
Beta: the amazing srsly_yes

A/N: This is the final next installment in a series of post-finale road trip stories that began in Virginia. Despite the title, this is NOT a death fic.

Part 1 here

It could have been mechanical-bull-induced euphoria. )

road trip series, fanfiction

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yarroway September 4 2012, 10:28:54 UTC
This is a great end to the series, and my favorite installment. I love the conversation between them and the explanation for Wilson's belief in the worst possible outcome, which has been accurate all too often. I'm happy that Wilson is willing to try treatment that has a chance of working. I like your portrayal of House as well, and the dialogue between them. Going back to the bar where they met is a great idea. The bull riding scene was great too, very understated and moving.

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sassyjumper September 4 2012, 14:30:30 UTC
Thanks very much. I'm glad this one was your fav, because I stressed a bit over it, more so than the others. Endings are tough :)

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deelaundry September 4 2012, 11:37:26 UTC
Absolutely wonderful.

Typo here - Wilson laughed humorously again.

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srsly_yes September 4 2012, 13:40:35 UTC
Whoops! I missed "humorlessly". *iz shamefaced beta* But thanks! :)

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sassyjumper September 4 2012, 14:01:50 UTC
Thanks a lot for reading, and for catching the typo. That was definitely not the word I was going for. Fixed.

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alternatealto September 4 2012, 13:29:11 UTC
Beautifully written! Gorgeous descriptions, both of places and of food, and you've got House and Wilson both perfectly. The story moved through such a complex mix of feelings on both men's parts in a completely realistic way that it was like traveling one of those roads where there's something different around each bend.

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sassyjumper September 4 2012, 14:05:26 UTC
Thanks very much. And I'm glad you thought they were IC. :)

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srsly_yes September 4 2012, 13:51:12 UTC
Well, you know already how much I'm in love with this fic and the whole series. I forgot to mention that I enjoyed Wilson finding the study. I like when he gets to show his medical smarts.

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sassyjumper September 4 2012, 14:07:34 UTC
I like when he gets to show his medical smarts

Me, too. I hate (in canon or otherwise) when he's portrayed as dopey. A little dorky? Sure. But not mentally slow on the draw.

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chocolate_frapp September 4 2012, 15:32:35 UTC
this is just great, alternately funny and sad just like the show was at its best. I saw and heard everything in my head.
(and you have as many food references in your fic as I tend to!)

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sassyjumper September 5 2012, 00:48:41 UTC
Thank you for reading! I've never even had the food I wrote about (vegan). :)

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chocolate_frapp September 5 2012, 14:09:14 UTC
that just shows you're a good writer. In one of my fics, I have House slurping mango with great pleasure right before Wilson seduces him and I don't even like mango.

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