Yes a good read. I don't remember all in such detail that I could compare each version but it did feel more finished. I did comment on a short review on Amazon that some topics might be a bit dark for the under 13 crowd though I think the viewpoint is unique and do recommend it.
Thank you both for reading and for the review. And I hope you enjoyed it. I'm working on the sequel now, which will somewhat "answer" Theta, and probably be a bit more 'fun' in some ways.
I am happy. I wouldn't say I'm necessarily 'proud'-all I did was spend time, effort and money to release a book that is unlikely to garner much readership. However, once I can start unfolding the universe for readers, I may be able to attract a few more over time, and regardless, I'll be able to share that world for what few people read it to enjoy.
It's been ages since I've been by LiveJournal but I'm so glad I happened by! I still feel bad that I never got around to re-reading your story and providing the feedback you deserved, but it was gripping and well-written and I shall happily add it to my cart! (And maybe even post a review once I've read it, too. :)
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~Fox
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Yes a good read. I don't remember all in such detail that I could compare each version but it did feel more finished. I did comment on a short review on Amazon that some topics might be a bit dark for the under 13 crowd though I think the viewpoint is unique and do recommend it.
I think you should be proud. :-)
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Thank you both for reading and for the review. And I hope you enjoyed it. I'm working on the sequel now, which will somewhat "answer" Theta, and probably be a bit more 'fun' in some ways.
I am happy. I wouldn't say I'm necessarily 'proud'-all I did was spend time, effort and money to release a book that is unlikely to garner much readership. However, once I can start unfolding the universe for readers, I may be able to attract a few more over time, and regardless, I'll be able to share that world for what few people read it to enjoy.
We'll see what happens.
~Fox
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It's been ages since I've been by LiveJournal but I'm so glad I happened by! I still feel bad that I never got around to re-reading your story and providing the feedback you deserved, but it was gripping and well-written and I shall happily add it to my cart! (And maybe even post a review once I've read it, too. :)
Congratulations again, sir!
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I would very much welcome your opinion and any feedback you had-positive or negative-once you've finished it.
Do let me know? ^.^
~Foxy
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