When You Find Your Way Home

[satoshilove]

Title: When You Find Your Way Home
Author: me
Pairing: Ohmiya
Rating: PG-15
Genre: fluff, romance
Summary: Finally,, Nino found his way home (I make Nino poor here,, gomen =9)
Disc.: they own each other and I own the fic, this is my first fanfic publish,, I'm really sory about my bad English. ><... coment always love XD

Comments

[fancyann1974]

oh this is just so cute and sweet
loved when ohno said there is always a place for you in my hom in my heart
thank you so much for sharing

[satoshilove]

Your welcome ^^,,,, thank for read my first fanfic =D,,
my heart melting when I imagine, Ohchan said that word for me >

[ichi_toshimiya]

Aaaaaw choooo sweeeeeet....!! <3
My Ohchan was so sweet I love this fict...
Thank you for sharing it and making this sweet fict... ^-^v

[satoshilove]

thank you for read my first fanfic ^^
..gomen, if there's so much mistake,,

I imagine Ohchan as a quiet person, but romantic =)

[ichi_toshimiya]

yes he is just like that.... :)

[harvinasawitri]

I love this fanfic!!!! thanks for share, Ohchan so romatic XD

[satoshilove]

thanks for reading ^^

[himitsu_17]

Ooooh it's really cute *-*

I like it! Don't worry, it seems that your english is quite good, but I sometimes saw some words that you didn't put ^-^ (Like the "When he IS angry with something"... You forgot the verb to be in some sentences XD) After that I don't know because English isn't my native language either :)

I like it and I wish you'll write more fanfics ~ (Ohmiya *-* Ohmiya *-* XD) And thank you for sharing ! ♥

I love the "There is always a place for (you wrote to but I think it's for ^^) you... In my home.. In my heart... always". It's cute ~

[satoshilove]

Yay!!! finally somebody critic my English.^O^ Thank you so much.. I'll try my best to upgrade my English in next fic..

Thank you for reading =D

[himitsu_17]

^-^ But don't worry your english is quite good :)

What is your first language by the way ?

And I wanted to tell you: If you post on Arashirabu, don't forget to use the tags, because like that, people will receive a mail if they have subscribe in some pairing. Like me, I follow all that is post with the pairing Ohmiya, but for your fanfic I haven't receive any mail, so I wouldn't have read it without seeing it in my inbox in LJ ^-^

[satoshilove]

my first languange is Indonesia, cause I live there ^^,,,
thanks for warn me,, this is my first published fanfic,, so i must learn much XD,,,

[pamelaxiah]

ow...
so sweeettt...
loved it...
happy that nino finally can find his home..
and sure that ohchan will give his best to nino..

thanks for sharing ^^
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