Comments | saucy_kate: [Inception][Cobb/Ariadne] Burning Everything In Sight

saucy_kate

[Inception][Cobb/Ariadne] Burning Everything In Sight

Jul 27, 2010 22:57

So I know I haven't posted fic in like, over six months. This might be my last fic for...quite awhile, since I'm going to be serving abroad for 2.5 years with minimal internet access as of September (although if I have my way, I'm going to write a shitton more Inception fic!) Anyway, I was trying to write some Arthur/Eames and...somehow I produced ( Read more... )

inception, cobb/ariadne

Comments 21

qiushuwen July 28 2010, 07:09:29 UTC

I ♥ this so hard. I liked how you made it more realistic by giving them time apart to heal and grow into their relationship.

kaeda July 29 2010, 16:15:57 UTC

Thank you! I wanted to try to give it more resolution, but they were being stubborn and I didn't want to push it. I'm glad you enjoyed how it worked out!

hereswith July 28 2010, 11:30:08 UTC

I liked that you didn't have them rushing into things here, and also your idea for Ariadne's future job. Nice work!

kaeda July 29 2010, 16:17:43 UTC

Ariadne's future job came to me on a whim, because I was trying to find out more about the psychology of dreams on wikipedia a few days ago and discovered there's a whole subsection called oneirology that is the study of dreams (I'm kindof a nerd :D). Anyway, thank you for reading!

irishcookie July 28 2010, 12:57:56 UTC

This is very nice! Realistic in that Dom would not just want to move on and that Ariadne would think about her life beyond just him. I love the idea that the whole team was in on it in one way or another. Great job!

kaeda July 29 2010, 16:19:50 UTC

I love the team, so I just had to include them all in it! (I even tried to include Fischer, but he just wouldn't fit.) I'm glad you enjoyed!

thursdays_girl July 28 2010, 14:07:18 UTC

This was...incredible. The writing style is perfect and it makes so much sense.

kaeda July 29 2010, 16:20:14 UTC

Thank you for your lovely praise! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

missmarie9 July 28 2010, 14:38:50 UTC

Squee. Setting Cobb up on dates so he perhaps falls in love with her is such an Ariadne thing to do. And, gah, the ending -- Cobb promising to wait and the job in LA -- it makes my heart stutter.

Thanks for this!

kaeda July 29 2010, 16:21:52 UTC

Ariadne was seriously a great character and I wanted to do her justice. She's pushy and difficult and awesome, and I feel like that's part of the reason why she works well with Cobb; he needs someone who will make him deal with the difficult parts of his life. I'm glad you liked how this turned out. Thank you for reading!

missmarie9 July 29 2010, 17:01:57 UTC

Exactly! Why can't other people get that? Only us shippers seem to notice that.