[Bleach][Urahara, Aizen] Surprise Visitor

[saucy_kate]

I HAVE DEFEATED WORD BY FIGURING OUT HOW TO GET RID OF SMARTQUOTES. OH SNAP!

And now I'm posting the first fic since...September. I've been so busy :( AND IT'S MY NEW FANDOM OF CHOICE, BLEACH.

You're going to be seeing a lot more of these. Trust me.

Title: Surprise Visitor
Fandom: Bleach
Rating: PG/PG-13
Pairing: one suggestion of past Aizen

Comments

[shieldkitten]

"You're still such a dork," Urahara grinned.

WIN!

Though... Aizen was a lot less smooth than I've gotten used to in fics. But I guess it's very difficult to be smooth around Urahara, who is so slick he could make oil slip.

[kaeda]

I'm glad you enjoyed!

Aizen has been difficult to get a grasp on mostly because in the series itself, he never really interacts with his peers (especially one like Urahara XD) and so he's either in HAHA I'M SO MUCH SMARTER THAN YOU LOOK AT ME mode like in the end of the Soul Society arc, or he's lording it over the Arrancars and being the smooth, tricky bastard we all know and love.

Part of the problem with his characterization in THIS particular fic is that I wrote it after four others in the same universe, so a lot of the stuff (like his exasperation at Urahara) make a bit more sense when you know the backstory. I really should have posted them in order, but I decided to post the least cracky one first to...ease people in? I don't know XD

I also kind of think he's probably a big dork at heart ._.

Thanks for your insight, and it's never bad for me to step back and reevaluate how I'm writing characters :D and for your lovely comment, of course!

[shieldkitten]

Now you have me all intrigued and I want to read more!

[kaeda]

Well I plan to post a sequel to this one within the next week, and the prequels which actually influenced it will be probably posted shortly after that. I want to space them out a bit so as not to flood the Bleach fandom with my insanity :3

Stay tuned!

[myuki_chan]

He'd touched godhood and decided he didn't want it, then hidden it away and kept it from those who truly desired it.

I cannot say how much I loved that line. I was reading and reading and read that and suddenly went, "Guh." I can't even say why. XD

I liked it very much. :D Your Urahara is awesome. ♥

[kaeda]

Urahara is so much fun to write. I can channel my insane side, and it comes out in character. How many characters can you say that about?

XD;

I'm glad you liked that line! Urahara really is a lot of trouble, and definitely one of my favorite characters in the series.

Thanks for the lovely comment!

[lykomancer]

Strangely, this works in a totally, completely FUBAR kind of way. Maybe because your Urahara is love. ♥

[kaeda]

You think this is bad, wait until you see the ones set when they're all captains together (if I ever have the guts to post those). Urahara is, of course, amazingly fun to write. :D

I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the comment!

[incandescens]

Brilliant. Made me grin quite inappropriately for work.

[kaeda]

I'm honored xD;

thanks for commenting! I'm glad you liked it

[zeovez]

This is *so* awesome! I love it to bits! From all the characters to their lines ♥

Brilliant! Utter (crack) and brilliance!

Bravo!

[kaeda]

*blushes* thank you! I do love to write crack, and I'm glad people like to read it too :3

Thanks for commenting!