[Bleach][Urahara, Aizen] Surprise Visitor

[saucy_kate]

I HAVE DEFEATED WORD BY FIGURING OUT HOW TO GET RID OF SMARTQUOTES. OH SNAP!

And now I'm posting the first fic since...September. I've been so busy :( AND IT'S MY NEW FANDOM OF CHOICE, BLEACH.

You're going to be seeing a lot more of these. Trust me.

Title: Surprise Visitor
Fandom: Bleach
Rating: PG/PG-13
Pairing: one suggestion of past Aizen

Comments

[charred_remains]

Ahhhh! Damn. It's hard to express how much you just made this sick woman's week. Your Urahara is just so... so... Urahara. I'm going to have to coast through your other writings once my tea is finished ^.^ Thank you very much for putting a smile on my face for the first time in a few days. Such a lovely fic. Keep writing!

[kaeda]

Oh, I feel totally honored that you want to check out my other stuff! There's not much here, actually, and this is my first Bleach fic, but I hope you find something you enjoy. A lot of my other writings are crackish too XD;

Also I will definitely be posting more fics in this universe, mostly because I a) already wrote a sequel and two prequels and b) love it to death. I just want to space them out to give people time to...breathe? Not die from insanity overload?

Thanks for the lovely comment!

[skyscape7]

Your Urahara is <3!

*stalks your journal*

[kaeda]

Oooh, stalkage! I feel so honored <3

Thanks for commenting!

[iapetusneume]

The mere idea of Urahara and Aizen being in the same room is what made me rush over here - nothing else even had to be said. But now that I've read it, I can say that I think it's wonderful. I've noticed that many writers have issues with writing Urahara, so it made me immensely happy to see him like this here.

I also love how you didn't say how Urahara got in. But not saying how, you help to display his brilliance because we wonder how he pulled it off. I'm all for leaving some details for the reader to figure out.

Urahara's attention to people is the other thing that made this story. Maybe part of the reason is he hasn't forgotten what happened to Rukia, and he vows not to do it again. He did say that he didn't wish for Ichigo to stain his hands with Aizen's blood. Ichigo is many things, but he's still young and there are some things young people shouldn't have to do. This is one of them. Also the mentioning of the 11th division, the subordinates, etc...

The best part of all was the ending. After all of this powerplay,

[kaeda]

Ever since I realised that Bleach was just essentially a bitchfest between Urahara and Aizen, with 2830968253 other people thrown in, I really wanted to see the two actually interact.

I love Urahara's character because he acts all dorky and goofy, but then he has these moments of startling brilliance. He's a joy to write for this very reason, and a very complex character but those are always my favorites :)

and now I admit I want to see what would happen if Ichigo stumbled on to that scene. XD I think it might break his poor brain.

...........is this the part where I tell you I ALREADY WROTE IT? XD XD (it's in the sequel to this one, which will be posted sometime within the next week probably :3)

Thank you for the nice long review! I love all reviews but my favorites are definitely the ones that detail what worked for people, so it makes me feel all sparkly ♥

[iapetusneume]

I love your description of the series. It's so true!

Urahara is one of my favorite characters in the series. I was so incredibly happy when it was revealed that he was more important than we thought.

...........is this the part where I tell you I ALREADY WROTE IT? XD XD (it's in the sequel to this one, which will be posted sometime within the next week probably :3)

*dies* That's awesome. You do realize this means I have to friend you now so I won't miss it, right? ♥

And I always try to leave reviews like that. I'm glad you appreciate them. Keep up the great work!

[kaeda]

Well I am always honored to be friended! I feel all sparkly now :D :D :D

I'm glad you enjoyed this so much ♥

[renuki]

THAT WAS AWESOME.

Urahara is ♥.

(Dude... I wanna see Isshin soon. XD)

[kaeda]

Isshin and Urahara in the same room is like...utter crack.

I'm glad you liked it :D thanks for commenting!

[renuki]

Aye. XD

You are welcome.

[blue_hobbit]

This whole story is love :)

[kaeda]

♥ I'm glad you think so!

Thanks for commenting!