Is she too bitchy or not bitchy enough? Any critiques about Larxene...please put them here!!

If you do not mind Larxene attacking, manipulating or whatever to your character then I would greatly appreciate it if you fill out the Permission Post!

Thank you so much!

[The LP turned on as Larxene threw it up and caught it. From the LP, it can be seen that she's in the forest. Lightning can be seen here and there sparking throughtout her as it shows her frusteration and irritation. The Witch keeps them there and these periods of quiet annoy her.]

[A high pitch screeching can be heard in the background and she ( Read more... )

[The LP turns on to see a very calm looking Larxene. She's not looking at the LP but instead she was staring off into the distance. Her eyes seem glazed as she continued to stare off. She blinked slightly and smirked. That was it, the finally memory had been pieced together. It had taken her months but she finally did it.

She glanced around at the ( Read more... )

[The LP's angle shows the green foliage of the ground as well as the bark of a tree. As she shifted, she knocked the LP onto its back and her smirking face can be seen. From the angle, it can be seen that she was sitting at the base of a tree. She slowly moved one foot under her and as she moved her hand, her knives can be seen. She seemed ( Read more... )

[Her eyebrow rises as she looks into the LP. Trees can be seen behind her, since she's up in the woods.]

Oh what to do? Should I go or not? Oh let me think about it.

[She looks like she's seriously thinking about it.]

I'm no one's toy and I REFUSED to be used in this way.

[She went into her portal and turned off the LP]

[Green eyes open and stare into the LP. The dull look is gone but she still seems a little lost. Her brain had been shattered and her memories were there but she still needed time to piece them back together. She sighs and looks away. She really did feel like part of her past was gone. She glanced down at her attire and she stared at herself.] What ( Read more... )

...System Reboot...
User is Online

[Her eyes flicker open but the brilliant green that her usual colors are, seemed dimmed. She stares at nothing although she moaned somewhat to show that she was still in pain. She didn't move or blink and she seemed almost dead.

Eventually her LP turned off.]

[The following flashes across the LP's screen before shutting down and going offline.]

ERROR MSG
_

USER: OFFLINE

SYSTEM SHUTTING DOWN

IN 3...2...1..._

SYSTEM SHUTDOWN NOW

 [The LP turns on to see a very happy and laughing Larxene.]

Oh you fools! You really thought that you could keep me! [She laughs some more. Its a very cruel laugh and it continues for a few seconds before she stops.]

Ohhh whats wrong? Did you all just realize that I got out of jail? Oh i'm so sorry. [To prove her point, she turned and shows the jail ( Read more... )