Rat Trap [6/6]

May 17, 2010 17:13

Title: Rat Trap [6/6]
Author/Artist: Sayasama
Character(s) or Pairing(s): Russia/US, and an "It's complicated" UK->US.  Minor pairings include: LietPol (platonic), Netherlands/Canada, and GerIta.  France and Prussia also make some appearances later. 
Rating: PG-13 (maybe M) for sexual themes, some swearing, and later allusions to violence.
Warnings: ( Read more... )

russia, america, usuk, us, russia/america, rat trap, uk

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ahmerst May 17 2010, 22:04:02 UTC
Ah, what a lovely and satisfying end! I'm sad to know and see that it really does have to finish, but that doesn't stop me from enjoying this chapter immensely. I just love how dynamic and real the characters are, and how they all interact. Also, I adore how you write Gilbert more than words could ever convey.

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sayasama May 18 2010, 19:56:55 UTC
Thanks! Endings are always such a bittersweet affair for everyone, huh?
Gilbert just demanded to be there. He's awesome that way.

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sageofwind_21 May 17 2010, 22:04:26 UTC
I have this image in my head that Ivan and Alfred's first time went reaaaaaaaaally slow.

Man, what a lovely ending to see after work! You delivered all the way, and, just, man, I was left with such a smile on my face! There hasn't been a lot of happy R/A fics lately, so it's really nice to see this, especially when Ivan was just there to be there. God, seriously, if you love us, you'll make Ivan real and available to all people.

And the epilogue, sheesh, how cute was that, Matthew telling Alfred he could go back to school? It made me incredibly happy. I'm sad to see it end, but it was worth to know how it ends. :)

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sayasama May 18 2010, 19:54:44 UTC
Reaaaaaally slow. And probably adorably awkward.

Thanks! The world needs more happy R/A fics. I dunno how plausible making Ivan real is, but it's questions like these that science was meant to tackle!

It just seemed like a really nice, hopeful ending and I couldn't see this ending any other way.

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sageofwind_21 May 19 2010, 00:19:04 UTC
If I was any good at those kind of scenes, I would try to write it, but... .

I agree. I love to read angst and hate fics, but I'm a romantic at heart, and I love to see the two of them in a situation where they don't snipe at each other, but depend on each other and love unconditionally. I can't get enough of the happy.

Definitely fits for this fic. :)

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disko_fire May 17 2010, 22:22:10 UTC
;____; seriously this was a great story <3,

aww Alfred's going to be a pilot :D

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sayasama May 18 2010, 19:51:04 UTC
Thanks!
Yes, and he will be dashing in his uniform (and Ivan will very much appreciate that.)

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saemi_mitsuwa May 17 2010, 22:26:46 UTC
Ahh~~ this was such a good ending! I loved this entire story, from start to finish :)

(Sorry I never commented before, as I just read through the past 5 chapters last night and was afraid to leave an in-coherent comment D: ).

And Alfred wanting to be a pilot = *perfect* xD

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sayasama May 18 2010, 19:48:39 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. <3

Fuggedaboutit, that you commented at all is awesome~!

He's just made for flight.

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rolmolo May 17 2010, 22:35:36 UTC
this is probably on of my favorite russiamerica stories. it was beautifully written and the characterizations were spot on! i do hope you write this pair in the future because you did them such justice it was unbelievable!

oh... and you should probably write a sequel.

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sayasama May 18 2010, 19:46:35 UTC
>//< Thanks! I'll definitely be writing more for these guys, they're so interesting.

Ah... dunno how one would go, but it's totally a possibility...There will definitely be more R/US if nothing else. xD

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