Three Decades Later - [Oneshot]

Aug 14, 2011 20:57

Title: Three Decades Later
Length: One-shot (approx. 5500 words)
Author: sayhell Rating: PG-13
Pairings: Kyuwook
Genre: Mild fluff, Mild angst (In actual fact, I don't really know)
Summary: A letter Kyuhyun received from his late wife propelled him to look for Ryeowook. Reunited after three decades of separation, Kyuhyun promised himself that he'll ( Read more... )

pairing: kyuhyun / ryeowook, type: oneshot

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leunah23 August 14 2011, 13:46:24 UTC
SPOT!!!! :)

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leunah23 August 14 2011, 15:02:49 UTC
sjdhfjashdfjhsdafjhasljfhsahflhahlahfjadhs----> now i think these kinds of comments appear in smut fics...but this is really my initial reaction
this fic is insanely BEAUTIFUL
awwwww...you made me cry so much...and yeah you're right this is so close to reality...
really painful but i admire Kyu's wife so much...and OMGEEEE...i think my favorite line/line that made me burst into tears--->
“I want to apologize to her so much,” Ryeowook whispered. A few tears wended down his cheek to find. “But I can’t. Because that would mean that I’m sorry for loving you.” ----> SHEESH *sniffles*
and yes you conveyed their unyielding love very very well
the kyuwook community is so so lucky to have you as one of it's very gifted writers!!! you really write soooooooooo well...
you weave each scene seamlessly and your imagery is so vivid i always feel like im walking right inside the story :) i will patiently wait for your update of Be Human (that fic is my current fave!)

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leunah23 August 14 2011, 15:15:26 UTC
and oh!!! i followed you on twitter..i hope you don't mind.. :) im bernalooney :)

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sayhell August 18 2011, 15:15:40 UTC
It's easier to write when the whole scene plays out in your mind, although I wouldn't be truthful if I say that writing this has been a breeze.

I'm glad that you feel for them, including Kyu's wife (I guess you're the only one that mentioned her). She's an amazing woman, isn't she?

I love that line of Ryeowook too. It jumped right into my mind when I pictured the scene in my head. I think that's what exactly Ryeowook would say.

Thank you for your compliments. Writing isn't a gift though, it's just hours and hours of sweat and effort. =)

Thanks for spending your time here. And see you on twitter. ^^

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ita90 August 14 2011, 14:11:29 UTC
Owww It's so sad but I'm happy that even if they were separated for so long in the end they reunited.

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sayhell August 18 2011, 15:40:18 UTC
Absence made their hearts fonder. Thanks for reading girl. ^^,

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yukwol August 14 2011, 14:27:40 UTC
beautiful and amazing, as expected ;A; it just tugged at my heartstrings. it's way too poignant, i really love it. elderly kyuwook didn't turn me off, i could imagine them still together despite the old age alksjdgkal the flow of story ran smoothly, every line had made me crave for the next. omg i really love it, idk what to say anymore. CRIES. ilu and kyuwook ;A; ♥

HAPPY 815! *hugs*

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sayhell August 18 2011, 15:42:57 UTC
Yes I can imagine them old, wrinkly, shriveled and still together. :) Writing this tugged my heartstrings at some point too. Glad that you felt the same way as I do.

Thanks for reading. ^^

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kyulyn August 14 2011, 14:31:43 UTC
this is absolutely amazing! you got me tear up once again, after Strangers Again. I read Strangers Again when I had the feeling that the relationship between the two of them in real life has been somehow cooling off, so I felt hurt. This one still has the realistic aura in it, but my feeling is different. This time my heart is warmed. You surprise me, really, because i knew that you were kind of rushing for this but it turns out so wonderful... Thanks so much for your heart work, and this beautiful piece of writing :)
I'd have many things to quote from this, but I'll choose only one line which made my eyes well with tears. “It’s our turn to be happy” those six words means so much, the pain they've gone through all these years for sacrificing their love for a peaceful life, the love that never dies despite the hardship, and the belated happiness for them. Later is always better than never though, isn't it?
Thank you again, I'll wait patiently for Be human :) No pressure~~~ Happy writing!

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yukwol August 14 2011, 14:39:37 UTC
it's our turn to be happy alsfjgalksjlk lmao i can't my heart EVERYTHING HURTS EVERYTHING THAT IS KYUWOOK HURTS RN LOLOL OTL happy 815 hihi ♥

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sayhell August 18 2011, 15:49:50 UTC
Lol angeline I love seeing you spazz. XD

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sayhell August 18 2011, 15:49:23 UTC
I thought of making this the sequel to 'Strangers Again' but I didn't. Didn't want the Ryeowook in 'Strangers Again' to turn back cos' he's too cool for that.

Actually writing this made my heart hurt more than 'strangers again'. Could almost feel their pain of not seeing each other for thirty years. I'm so evil to manipulate them this way. Lol.

This is the best ending for them. Getting back into each other's life after the society has overlooked them. I can't help but think that this is the only way they can be together.

Thanks for reading this dear. Will continue writing once the spark gets back and after I stop struggling with myself. See you.^^

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sayhell August 18 2011, 15:50:58 UTC
True love don't fade with the passing of time and this is the message I want to convey with this story.

Thanks for spending your time here dear. =)

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