[fic] Gravity

[scacao]

So I suppose I should post the other fic I wrote for the fic exchange, since I forgot :/ I really have meant to write more lately, but Otakon is at the end of the month and cosplay is taking up allll my free time

Comments

[momentsdrift]

This little story is made of squee. I especially loved Trowa comparing Quatre to things on Earth, and saying that the first thing he wants to do there is go to bed. So sweet.

Also... I got through all the short entries in record time, mostly because I skipped anything with bad grammar/bad punctuation that made my head hurt to read. It's more than a bit of a relief to find I'm not the only one that does that XD

[scacao]

Thanks :D 3x4 is made of squee for me, so this was an excuse to get really fluffy.

I'm glad you do the same thing! It's like, it could be the best story in the world, but I'll never know, because having to reconstruct sentences in my head to make them understandable takes me completely out of it. It's a shame :(

[sharona1x2]

That was a lovely story, which is what I always expect of you. (No worries, you haven't come close to disappointing me, and I don't think you ever will.) I liked the mood of this piece. It's nice to read something that's more thought- and emotion-based than action-based. I like seeing the thoughtful side of Trowa Barton. Sleepy Quatre Winner is probably irresistible.

i also enjoyed Trowa comparing Quatre to things on Earth. For some reason, Quatre is the one pilot I always think of when I think of Earth.

Years of being in GW fandom has taught me how to overlook bad spelling/bad grammar. I will admit that when I'm reading anything that goes on my site, I do wish I could fix typos and missed/wrong words.

[scacao]

Thank you!! I really try not to disappoint :D (I have some fics half-written that will probably never see the light of day because of this)

Yeah, for some reason to me, Quatre in particular doesn't seem to belong in space. It's a weird thing.

I kind of envy your ability to overlook the spelling/grammar. It just drives me crazy.

[okaasan59]

"his eyes were blue like shallow seawater"

I love this image.

[scacao]

Thanks! :D

[cuteciboulette]

I liked the atmosphere, serene and a little melancholic too. (Although I don't agree with the fact that the Gboys would go to live an Earth. To me, they're really colony-born. Except maybe for Wufei, because his colony doesn't exist anymore...)

[scacao]

That's interesting that you think that way. To me, I could see it ending up either way. Like, they are from space, but maybe the events on Earth affected them enough to make them want to go back? It's one of those things I like to explore in stories from time to time :)