Comments | scamall: office au part 1

scamall

office au part 1

May 02, 2013 16:20

Title: office au
Pairing: various
Rating: pg 13
Warning:
Disclaimer: not true at all

( various footballers work in an office )

fic

Comments 13

loozy May 5 2013, 07:18:04 UTC

I love it :D Haha. All quirky and crazy bit still instantly likeable characters... The promise of Andres/Victor is a bonus as well as the hint if Stevie/Xabi (lol at their email heading). I really like it & am looking forward to the next installment :)

Please update soon!

scamall May 5 2013, 17:33:16 UTC

thanks so much. i'm so glad the characters are likeable and not just straight up annoying.

arisu_wa_doko May 5 2013, 08:23:58 UTC

Hahaha are you the one that fills kinkmeme prompt? Please continue.

scamall May 5 2013, 17:34:18 UTC

ah yeah that was me as well, they were so much fun to write. i hope you like this as much as that

bumblebee13 May 5 2013, 12:30:14 UTC

Ooooooo I like it!! Hope you continue!!! :D

scamall May 5 2013, 17:34:49 UTC

thank you!

charliechaz May 5 2013, 13:26:00 UTC

Every part of this is clever:

"They also had sex in the stationary cupboard with alarming regularity, which deeply offended the Stationary Manger Luca Modric." amazing

Xavi as the union rep in addition to his work!
The bit about the sex addict and the evangelical christian
The inter-office cat memes
Xabi and Steven running off to travel Europe...leaving no filing system
The goal keepers are software department! Of course they are!
leo and Cristiano as adversaries in the advertising department with poor Villa in the middle

"Add to this the man sent over by their German sister company, a pair of locust like cleaners and a security guard who did nothing but talk about his new baby and beloved girlfriend and you’ll start to understand the pot Andrés was trying to stop bubbling over."

It seems like exactly whay they would be doing if they were in an office. I cannot wait to see 'the pot boil over'.

scamall May 5 2013, 17:38:26 UTC

okay wow, it thrills me so much that you liked this and your comment is basically a list of my favourite things in this fic. :)

lovinthelads May 5 2013, 17:46:27 UTC

This seems like it will be a lot of fun!

I feel like I need a cheat sheet to remember everyone, but I like how it's started!

*sends Andres a nice fruit basket*

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scamall May 5 2013, 19:08:01 UTC

thank you so much

*unfortunately the fruit basket gets left in the staff room and all andrés is left with is a blackened banana and some burst grapes*
ps i love your sport of the gods series

lovinthelads May 5 2013, 19:09:32 UTC

Oh dear, Andres! *pats*

(thank you!!! It's a lot of fun to write!)