What a great chapter, Brynne. I really enjoyed to see the development with Haley; she is taking a step forward, and erasing a little part of being the innocent girl. The way she is with Nathan is really amazing to read, you can really feel how much they care for each other. I really love how you have created the tension between Haley, Nathan and Lucas, without one of them being aware of it.
All in one, fabulous chapter. Thank you for sharing.
I have seriously read this entire story like three times, and I'm so happy that you've updated it several times over the past week. These last three chapters have been amazing, and as always your development is just perfect. I love the characters you've made here. These are the REAL Nathan and Haley, something we definitely lack sometimes in the real show. I love the direction you took the story, and I love the change in nathan. Ok, it's not much of one, he still wants Lucas off the team anyway he can, but he's been trying to think of a way to keep Haley at the same time because he is totally in love with her! I freaking love this story, and I'm going to go re-read these last few chapters.
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All in one, fabulous chapter. Thank you for sharing.
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