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'Approaching Normal' - Chapter Eleven

May 17, 2009 14:10

( When you've got nothing, you have nothing to lose. )

Comments 7

dawnieangel May 17 2009, 22:05:28 UTC

Okay, I didn't think I'd ever say this but I'm glad you held out on posting this chapter because I want more like now and I'm only placated by the fact that I know there's another one coming soon ( ... )

k_lafferty May 17 2009, 22:30:01 UTC

Gosh I've missed this story...your writing. This chapter was just phenomenal. I love him going out to Cali - he did warn her after all! - and asking to stay! And then! her letting him! Ah, so good. I cracked up when Maria got in the car to talk to Nathan such a thing to do.
Great job Miss Brynne and I hope to see the next chapter soon! I've missed it so!

youfallaway May 18 2009, 21:13:31 UTC

Gah, I've missed your writing! I know life can get quite crazy, so I'm really happy that you found some time to sit down and write.

This story is so much love. I'm going on very little sleep (my brother's getting married Saturday so my life is crazy, like I mentioned above, lol), so I won't go into too, too much detail but! I just love this. And while it didn't feel like a filler chapter at all, and I don't think it was one, it did feel like one of those chapters for me where you get to the end and you're just like, "NO! What next?!" Hee. It's a chapter that kind of leads into a whole slew of new things for the characters, you know? And I can't wait!

sugangel7 May 22 2009, 06:39:34 UTC

I am SO glad that you updated ( ... )

And what I want to say doesn't always fit in 1 comment... sugangel7 May 22 2009, 06:40:19 UTC

Anyways, I really enjoyed their interaction in this chapter. Although it did serve to highlight how both of them are in such different places right now when it comes to their heads and their hearts. Nathan's ready to take a chance on them; he's certain of what he wants. Haley is doing her best to keep her heart guarded; she has no idea what she wants but she knows she's not ready to get hurt again ( ... )

anonymous June 2 2009, 10:53:34 UTC

Okay, I'm really glad you updated. I'm happy that Haley's giving NAthan another chance, but I'm worried she might let him in too soon. After what happened, I can understand all her hesitancy.

I also wish that Haley had more friends there. She seems quite isolated except for her younger friends.

ALso just a suggestion, if you posted on FanFic you would probably get more reviews and your story is way too good to only get a few reviews.

Thanks for the update.