This is so good. You never fail to make me cry Brynne. I love Nathan's persistence. And Haley's tubborness. I can't wait to read more, I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
I am going to leave a more decent comment some other time, but I just wanted to let you know that I love this story! This chapter was lovely, I love Nathan and him fighting for Haley, it is rare in stories, but it shouldn't be! ;) Thank you so much for sharing your story, Brynne.
I just wanted to say how much I love this story. While I completely understand Haley's wariness, especially as she hasn't had the dramatic, life re-evaluating events that Nathan had, how does she not completely melt at "I can make you happy in every imaginable way, and I think you know it" and “I want to marry you. I want to see our child grow inside of you. I want to cheer with you when he takes his first step?”
I'm so glad you've found the time to write a few more chapters and hope you'll be able to find more!
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I'm so glad that you are writing. I'm so glad that I found them. Thank you for continuing to write. I enjoy your stories so much.
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I'm so glad you've found the time to write a few more chapters and hope you'll be able to find more!
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