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Sep 22, 2004 17:13

SOOOO...
yeah. good stuff yo.

Title: To Want, To Need
Author: Chinsky
Pairing: Zack/Freddy
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Zack and Freddy are at a party. Freddy punches out a guy 'cause the guy's an asshole. Hmm, where, just WHERE will it go from there?
Disclaimer: Nothing. Niente. Nada. Zip. Zilch. GARGHH!!! It's a one shot, by the way, if you couldn't ( Read more... )

slash, freddy/zack

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theirishpig September 22 2004, 17:37:43 UTC
im not the biggest fan of zack/freddy slash but this was good.

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Yaaaaaaaaaaaaay! tommy_gnosis September 22 2004, 18:28:08 UTC
*grins widely* Darling, you've done good.

First, the imagery in the scene where Freddy tells Zack he can see the stars in his eyes was...just...beautiful. I could actually *see* it happening.

And this:
"Geez," Zack accidentally murmured aloud, lost in his thoughts. Freddy lifted his head up abruptly.

"What?"

Zack blushed again and shook his head. "Nothing. I was just...thinking."

Freddy's face softened. "About what?"

"You. This. How much I wasn't ever expecting it and...and how good it feels."
Made me go all gooey inside. Lovely. Cutey cutey cuteness. And when they said I love you...!!! Yaaaay. I loved it. Please do write more. Of any pairing. (But I like this one a lot :D)

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Re: Yaaaaaaaaaaaaay! naser_ona September 24 2004, 20:11:50 UTC
thank youuu!! i'm flattered! :)

WHOA! i made an icon JUST LIKE THAT once!!
that's scary.
like, same picture.
and like, the same saying.
whoaaaa.
haha.

Rose

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w00tiful October 28 2004, 22:47:21 UTC
boowahhahaha, in a perfect world I would love to believe I had a part in this. So lie to me.

P.S. SORRY THIS REVIEW IS LATE BUT I AM LAME.

Oh man, please write more. I wish my first slashiness was as good as that. The imagery was so beautiful, and man. Just.

Yeah. Articulate words are failing me.

Just... yeah. You know. Yeah.

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naser_ona November 21 2004, 15:48:20 UTC
ha, i don't need to lie to you, you totally did. yours on this community (wow i forget the name but it was the 5 chapter one, not the one shot) was like the second one i had ever read, and it changed my opinion about slash. in fact, i clicked on it, began to read (not realizing it was a slash) and started freaking out to my friends online...they told me to ex it out so i told them i did but i really didnt. haha. so don't worry i dont have to lie.

and i'm totally flattered. really. i realized you have a ff.net name and you're even mentioned as a cameo in some of Nuwanda's stuff. (Lizz in 21 and Invincible...i'm so weird that i know this) I'm Chinsky on ff.net. yayyy. awesome. grazie x 340556356

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blackroseasylum November 21 2004, 13:19:26 UTC
I read a lot of Freddy/Zack slash (well, what I can find xD). And this one made me all mushy gushy and happy inside. ^___^

Zack smiled, deeply embarrassed, but replied modestly, "Not everyone likes me. I don't care."

"They should like you."

"They don't have to."

"But they should," Freddy finalized, and laid his head back down again.

"Well, thank you," Zack whispered, so close to Freddy's ear that it tingled.

Particularly that part. It was totally something I would say. xD

Sankyuu for writing this~! ^o^

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naser_ona November 21 2004, 15:42:34 UTC
haha aww thank yooouu...no problem. i'm glad you liked it :)

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A Post by Tubular Fox. anonymous March 15 2007, 21:02:46 UTC
I LOVE this fic! I also love the song 'White Houses' but that's a different story. Anyway, I hope you keep writing!

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