SOOOO...
yeah. good stuff yo.
Title: To Want, To Need
Author: Chinsky
Pairing: Zack/Freddy
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Zack and Freddy are at a party. Freddy punches out a guy 'cause the guy's an asshole. Hmm, where, just WHERE will it go from there?
Disclaimer: Nothing. Niente. Nada. Zip. Zilch. GARGHH!!! It's a one shot, by the way, if you couldn't
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First, the imagery in the scene where Freddy tells Zack he can see the stars in his eyes was...just...beautiful. I could actually *see* it happening.
And this:
"Geez," Zack accidentally murmured aloud, lost in his thoughts. Freddy lifted his head up abruptly.
"What?"
Zack blushed again and shook his head. "Nothing. I was just...thinking."
Freddy's face softened. "About what?"
"You. This. How much I wasn't ever expecting it and...and how good it feels."
Made me go all gooey inside. Lovely. Cutey cutey cuteness. And when they said I love you...!!! Yaaaay. I loved it. Please do write more. Of any pairing. (But I like this one a lot :D)
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WHOA! i made an icon JUST LIKE THAT once!!
that's scary.
like, same picture.
and like, the same saying.
whoaaaa.
haha.
Rose
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P.S. SORRY THIS REVIEW IS LATE BUT I AM LAME.
Oh man, please write more. I wish my first slashiness was as good as that. The imagery was so beautiful, and man. Just.
Yeah. Articulate words are failing me.
Just... yeah. You know. Yeah.
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and i'm totally flattered. really. i realized you have a ff.net name and you're even mentioned as a cameo in some of Nuwanda's stuff. (Lizz in 21 and Invincible...i'm so weird that i know this) I'm Chinsky on ff.net. yayyy. awesome. grazie x 340556356
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Zack smiled, deeply embarrassed, but replied modestly, "Not everyone likes me. I don't care."
"They should like you."
"They don't have to."
"But they should," Freddy finalized, and laid his head back down again.
"Well, thank you," Zack whispered, so close to Freddy's ear that it tingled.
Particularly that part. It was totally something I would say. xD
Sankyuu for writing this~! ^o^
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