Potholes

[scourgeofeurope]

Title: Potholes
Author: scourgeofeurope 
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Gen
Word count: 1367
Warnings/Spoilers: N/A
Summary: But, yeah, that’s probably what this is, this sickness. Sam thought those sniffles were just the product of a new orphan’s tears, but apparently they were something more and something worse, and there’s another something inside his chest, a guilty

Comments

[geckoholic]

Your description of the "new orphan" and Dean comforting her and Sam watching him do it is going to haunt me for a long, long time. *sniffles*

[bookworm0401]

I always use the word evocative when I read your stories, so it appears I will just have to repeat myself indefinitely. *g* Truly, you create such an atmosphere: being orphans, the car as home, the feeling of being sick and caring for a sick person, the emptiness of *today's* motel, etc.

Sometimes when I read comments on Show and canon lately it seems as people have forgotten what a lack of socialization the guys have had in their lives. They just *aren't* like the rest of us; they have experience of a whole different universe than the one most of us grew up in. As always, a universe captured by you most excellently.

[jespretender]

Loved it! Douchecanoe! Brilliant!

[quickreaver]

So charming! Right down to the 'douchecanoe'. :D

[27_jaredjensen]

Aww, this was really beautifully written ♥ And poor Dean muffin. Love!