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hate_me_sweetly August 18 2005, 03:31:34 UTC
very very good darling, it was emotional. i loved it

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tangled___ August 18 2005, 03:33:04 UTC
HeyHey Tenhave (aka Not A Cop)!

I'm actually really surprised at how well written this is (no offense, I just wouldn't expect it from you.) I like it and I think it's really good that you're getting your emotions out through this versus other methods which could turn out badly. Not to mention, it takes a lot to post your own writing online (at least to me it does!) Anyways, if ya ever need to vent or whatever, I'm around. You got the s/n, the #, etc. I'll miss seeing you around Shaw's so you better keep in touch!

Glad you liked the surprise on your car :D SUCKA!
*Julie

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vndicated August 18 2005, 03:48:15 UTC
wow.

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scrdwarrior2004 August 18 2005, 04:40:01 UTC
ok i have been questioning on whether or not to put in comment in or not but i think i should.

this is in no way an attack on jacque even though yes it is about her. it is about the pain and the loss that i have felt in the past. it has been brought to my attention that this was somewhat clear minus the line "put on your shoes its time to flee" this is more involved than what is said. a scenerio is best used to describe this line. two people that are in love are in a fight and the woman decides to leave and the man out of anger say "just leave you do not care anymore" when in reality she is leaving because she does care. it is hard to show that point since this is just words on a screen.

i hope this helps clear up any confusion that there might have been. thak you to those of you who have commented and i hope that more people comment in the future because this was an easy decision to publically post this due to the level of emotion in it.

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livnlarge004 August 19 2005, 04:52:38 UTC
As I told you on the phone, very nice job writing this! I think you should publicize it.
What a great way to show your emotions!

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