LJ Idol Week 8: First World Problem

Jan 06, 2011 16:16

The light from the setting sun dances on the water. The younger children run screaming and laughing in and out of the waves. I sit on the sand, idly tracing patterns in it with the tips of my fingers and watching my younger sister out in the water with the other children. We’ve been here for five days, but I haven’t gone into the water yet. It’s ( Read more... )

writing, ljidol

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walkertxkitty January 11 2011, 22:46:31 UTC
Well written, so poignant and beautiful. I liked this.

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scriblesnbraile January 11 2011, 23:42:07 UTC
Thank you.

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m_malcontent January 12 2011, 00:34:38 UTC
Powerful entry, enjoyed!

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scriblesnbraile January 12 2011, 17:53:43 UTC
Thank you!

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