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Fic: Jumping In; PG13; S/D

May 22, 2007 17:25

Title: Jumping In
Author: Triciabyrne1978Email: TriciaByrne1978@gmail.com ( Read more... )

Comments 20

groovekittie May 22 2007, 21:48:27 UTC

Heheeeee! I loved this! So very quirky and cute. But not overly so, y'know? Just like Daniel says at the end, it was a level that I was comfortable with. ;)

(I especially loved the present for Cassie. lol)

triciabyrne1978 May 22 2007, 23:36:19 UTC

*giggles*

TY!

And being that this was my first time writing Sam/Dan I figured I'd take it slow... I hadn't even planned on a definite kiss, but it kind of developed and seemed to work, though I'm much happier with the post beta'd version.

aurora_novarum May 22 2007, 23:48:10 UTC

Oh I loved this. Sam and Daniel just hanging out. The movie scene...all I could think of was their workout scene in "Orpheus"--wait, give me a moment with that mental picture--okay. :-)

You captured their dialogue perfectly to how I often perceive them.

The mystery of the Victoria's Secret bag, and the reveal were just classic. Awesome!

triciabyrne1978 May 22 2007, 23:56:11 UTC

I have always LOVED that scene in "Orpheus", especially since a friend and I had a very similar conversation about Signs.

Thanks so much for the wonderful feedback. I think posting this is the most nervous I've been about a fic in years.

marag May 23 2007, 00:41:53 UTC

::giggles and sniffles simultaneously:: Awwww! I love it :) I love the image of Daniel turning bright red in Victoria's Secret, especially. And I *adore* that what she bought was actually a present for Cassie. ::dies::

Thank you :D

triciabyrne1978 May 23 2007, 00:45:24 UTC

*pumps fists in the air*

YAY!!!!

I am SO glad that you like it. I was worried.

marag May 23 2007, 13:01:16 UTC

I liked it very much :)

traycer_ May 23 2007, 02:42:35 UTC

LOL Poor Daniel, being dragged through a mall and horrors upon horrors a Victoria's Secret store!! *giggle* I loved it!! :)

triciabyrne1978 May 23 2007, 02:49:49 UTC

*Smiles*

What can I say... I like torturing Daniel.

*shrugs*

Glad you enjoyed it!

rigel_7 May 23 2007, 07:15:14 UTC

*grins*

Poor Daniel. Underwear shopping and perfume! This was really sweet - especially the little detail about Sam finding a scent that didn't set off his allegeis.

:D

triciabyrne1978 May 23 2007, 12:01:35 UTC

*giggles*

That was one of those funny things that popped up without me even planning it.

Glad you enjoyed it!