Three Yakuza and a Baby, Chapter 7

Oct 04, 2008 19:13

Title: Three Yakuza and a Baby, Chapter 7: Asami's unrest
Author: priestess_grrrl
Series: Viewfinder, which belongs to the wonderful Yamane-sensei, not me.
Pairing: Asami/Akihito
Rating: PG 13
Notes: Once again, thank you for waiting!

Chapter 1 Chapter 2 Chapter 3 Chapter 4 Chapter 5 Chapter 6

Chapter 7 )

viewfinder, three yakuza, asami/akihito

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beingloveless October 5 2008, 00:33:07 UTC
No no Asami pulling out Fei's hair is bad!

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sea_priest3ss October 5 2008, 01:48:55 UTC
Tee hee, don't worry, Feilong has a few cards up his sleeve, if you recall. Asami may be able to out-seme him when they are on equal ground, but Feilong actually has the upper hand in this situation. Asami needs information; Feilong has information. Plus, normally it's Feilong who is the loose cannon, but in this case, Asami is snorting and pawing at the ground like a bull right now, whereas Fei is cool as a cucumber. Should be really interesting! Stay tuned, and thanks for reading...! ^_^

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bamboo3117 October 5 2008, 01:02:09 UTC
Wow...this is just getting better and better ! I'm really intrigued by the plot so far. Just what the heck is going on? *tears out hair*
I love the way you portray how Aki has crept into Asami's heart..so sweet!
My favorite part : "In Akihito's world,the new flavor of ice-cream at the 7-Eleven was the most pressing matter in the world..." LOL
Please update soon,thanks!

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sea_priest3ss October 5 2008, 01:58:00 UTC
Thank you! *dances*

I'm glad you liked worried!Asami, because I worked really hard trying to express his concern for Aki without going OC. I just thought that following the events of NT 17, he would be just a little PTSD about it, you know? His face in the last chapter was just...! *emos* So yeah, I figured he'd be at least somewhat freaking out, as much as Asami ever does, LOL.

And yes, Aki+IceCream = OTP! Thanks for reading! ^_^

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darkangeltrish October 5 2008, 01:07:05 UTC
Oh dear..Asami is agitated and pissed.

Fei,stop making Asami irritated. Just go see him A.S.A.P..tsk,tsk..

Hope Aki is alright..

Thanks for the update. Can't wait to see what will happen next. :D

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sea_priest3ss October 5 2008, 02:53:14 UTC
heh, if you think Fei's being irritating now, well, he's just warming up, actually...! *ducks* To be continued next chappie! Thanks so much for reading! ^_^

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athenaartisan October 5 2008, 01:50:23 UTC
Haha Asami nearly lost it. Love it. Feilong better speak fast when he arrives. long hair guys never been my thing but i can't NO DON't want to see Feilong like that.

Get Aki back quick.

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sea_priest3ss October 5 2008, 02:55:24 UTC
heh, don't worry, Feilong can hold his own against Asami. At least, he can when he's got cards up his sleeve, which he does in this case. It's going to be interesting writing the two of them going at it next chappie...! And yes, we'll be getting back to Aki soon, too. Thanks for reading...! ^_^

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takara94 October 5 2008, 01:54:23 UTC
LoL~ I think fei enjoys spending asami's money a little too much~ XDD Aki!!!!!! Where is Aki~!????

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sea_priest3ss October 5 2008, 03:17:41 UTC
Don't worry: we'll get back to Aki eventually. First some hawt AsamixFei infighting, though. Can't wait to dive into that! Thanks for reading...! ^_^

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