Three Yakuza and a Baby, Chapter 7

Oct 04, 2008 19:13

Title: Three Yakuza and a Baby, Chapter 7: Asami's unrest
Author: priestess_grrrl
Series: Viewfinder, which belongs to the wonderful Yamane-sensei, not me.
Pairing: Asami/Akihito
Rating: PG 13
Notes: Once again, thank you for waiting!

Chapter 1 Chapter 2 Chapter 3 Chapter 4 Chapter 5 Chapter 6

Chapter 7 )

viewfinder, three yakuza, asami/akihito

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mssupafan October 5 2008, 02:37:06 UTC
YAY!! You updated! *hugs* I missed this story. =]

The interaction between Asami and Feilong is almost comedy..lol

Now I hope Asami finds Aki before those woman do anything to him. I can't wait for the next update!!

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sea_priest3ss October 5 2008, 03:00:52 UTC
Thank you! *glomps* It's twice as exciting when I know people IRL who are reading my fics...! *dances*

hahaha, don't worry, there's no Yuri!women there (gross!) Asami will definitely come to rescue his boy, but there may be a surprise in store for him...! *laughs mysteriously* Thanks for reading, honey! ^_^

Oh BTW PS do you mind if I post our group fic on the yamane_ayano comm? Just thought I'd check before I put it up!

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mssupafan October 5 2008, 03:07:07 UTC
ohhh....special surprise! I can hardly wait to see what that is.

No, I don't mind if you post the pic. =] (you meant group pic and not fic right? because I don't remember doing a fic..lol)

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sea_priest3ss October 5 2008, 03:11:02 UTC
*eyeroll* yes, pic. Dyslexia FTW...! :P Cool, I'll post them soon!

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mammarella October 5 2008, 02:55:13 UTC
"someone has their Calvin Kleins in a bunch" ROFL!!!

And YES! Let's torture Fei for a little bit! Just a tiny little torture! Please? :D~

Nice to know that Asami worries so much about Akihito. It was a great part of the story! Loved it :)

I am also glad that you think that there is a strong relationship between Aki and ice-cream :D I don't know if you remember, I wanted to write a story about it, but then though that it would be too silly.
Now, thanks to you, I feel confident enough to finish it! Yippy!!! :D

OK, OK!
That was fantastic! I am absolutely in love with your story :)
Thanks for updating.

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sea_priest3ss October 5 2008, 03:09:33 UTC
YES! Let's torture Fei for a little bit! Just a tiny little torture! Please?

hahaha, this is hilarious: everyone else was like, "NO, DON'T LET ASAMI HURT FEI!" and you're like, "DO IT, DO IT, DO IT!!" *dies laughing* Oh, that's delicious! Well, we'll just have to see what the two of them do. I'm just the choreographer; they decide how the dance actually goes...!

And yes, I totally remember your AkixIceCream plotbunny, and I totally want you to write it! And ekaterin24 wants to read it, too! So definitely post it!

Thanks, sweetie! More soon! (or at least at some point, heh...!) ^_^

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Ice Cream Story mammarella October 5 2008, 03:29:25 UTC
See, I have the beginning of the story and the end of the story, but I have no clue how to connect it. It is actually the third AND LAST (for all the people out there who threw rotten food into me after ch. 1 and then begged for ch. 2 and 3 and more) installment of "Revenge of Akihito".
I need time off to think about it.
There, got that off my chest :) But I believe NOW something will come to me :)
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Fei is simply asking for a torture. Especially with Asami in his current mood. All the favourable prerequisites are in place :D
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I think I will take off to finish my story. Thanks again! **hugs**

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gen50 October 5 2008, 03:02:45 UTC
oh dear. i'm afraid i am saying, isnt there more?

the cliffie is still a cliffie (the one with aki. is he going to be alright?)
hmmm. shall we see fei and asami in action?

... looking forward to the next chapter

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sea_priest3ss October 5 2008, 03:15:40 UTC
hahaha, yes, like Yamane-sensei, I have a love for cliffies... sorry about that! *bows*

And yes, I have two LJs: this is my fic LJ, and priestess_grrrl is my regular one. I mostly do it just to keep them organized!

We will definitely be seeing Fei and Asami in action next chappie, so stay tuned! Thanks so much for reading! ^_^

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usersauba October 5 2008, 03:33:09 UTC
That was another great update. This chapter has a more serious tone than the others which were more comical. I like them all :)

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sea_priest3ss October 5 2008, 23:31:12 UTC
Thank you! Yeah, Asami is hard to write crack, really, he keeps insisting on being serious. Except when he's horny. ^_~

Thanks for reading! More soon! ^_^

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shad0wg8 October 5 2008, 04:21:01 UTC
Just went through and read all the chapters. 0_0 This is really good! I like your style. There's mystery, suspense, action, a little comedy... Very nicely written. You've got me wondering where all this is leading, and I'll happily go along for the ride. Hope to see more soon! ^_^

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sea_priest3ss October 5 2008, 23:32:43 UTC
Thank you! *squees* It's exciting when people read it all at once! More coming soon; thanks for reading! ^_^

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