Three Yakuza and a Baby, Chapter 7

Oct 04, 2008 19:13

Title: Three Yakuza and a Baby, Chapter 7: Asami's unrest
Author: priestess_grrrl
Series: Viewfinder, which belongs to the wonderful Yamane-sensei, not me.
Pairing: Asami/Akihito
Rating: PG 13
Notes: Once again, thank you for waiting!

Chapter 1 Chapter 2 Chapter 3 Chapter 4 Chapter 5 Chapter 6

Chapter 7 )

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nmlott22 October 5 2008, 04:53:30 UTC
Fei has a great since of humour. I hope they find Aki!!
hope you update soon!!

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sea_priest3ss October 9 2008, 02:16:47 UTC
Thank you! And I will try to update soon. School is eating me alive currently, but maybe this weekend...! Thanks for reading! ^_^

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turtlefire October 5 2008, 08:19:42 UTC
A big cliff hanger! I pity Asami's anxiety over his sick puppy. But I don't think Asami should take it out on Fei at all. Fei didn't ask to come into the mess. Asami was the one who screwed too many women and created a problem for himself. Fei was just wonderful, helpful, beautiful and more. Asami better brought Fei some expensive diamond gifts later. Asami should get a huge Kung Fu kick in the neck if he wouldn't lose his attitude in the next chapter!

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priestess_grrrl October 9 2008, 02:28:40 UTC
Fei was just wonderful, helpful, beautiful and more.

Tee hee, do we have a little bit of a crush on our lovely Feilong-sama? Can't think why! Sometimes I think he's so beautiful I just want to lick him off the page...! *fangirl sigh*

I'm sure Feilong would agree with you that he is perfectly innocent, and Asami is perfectly dastardly. Don't worry, though: Feilong can hold his own against Asami, especially when he's holding all the cards, which in this situation, he is. Although I wouldn't put it past Asami to try to manipulate him anyway. Hence, the nature of their deliciously screwed up relationship. Really looking forward to writing the next chappie...! *cackles in fangirlish glee* Thanks so much for reading...! ^_^

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akuma_river October 5 2008, 08:40:56 UTC
Sounds like Asami is suffering from PTSD.
Poor guy, it might be best to talk this over with Akihito. It might help to curve Akihito's carefree-change-schedule-at-a-drop-of-the-hate behavior without crushing his spirit and ultimately driving him away from Asami.

Love it.

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sea_priest3ss October 8 2008, 03:13:47 UTC
Thank you! Yes, I have a thing for PTSD!semes. I write them often. It just struck me as a potentially traumatizing experience, this whole last chapter, even for someone as hardened as Asami. And especially since he's starting to have real feelings for Akihito whether he likes it or not. I don't know if he's capable of talking to him about it; that takes an awful lot of vulnerability, which is clearly not his strong suit. But it would be good if Aki could figure it out, because they're clearly missing each other on this one.

Anyway, thanks so much for reading! BTW I really like your Obama icon. ^_^

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akuma_river October 8 2008, 03:45:32 UTC
It does make sense. Eventually everyone will suffer from tragic event and develop ptsd if you are in that line of work. Heck, the Sopranos was about Tony having anxiety problems. ;d

Yes, I like my Obama icon too. I downgraded my LJ account to basic and I have only one icon, my default icon and what better way to spread the love of Obama. ;d

A friend cropped the picture, it's a painting an artist made for an Obama rally. You can take if you want as long as you credit the artist.

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ljkfantasy October 5 2008, 09:29:02 UTC
awesome, cant wait to see the next chapter, thks :D

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sea_priest3ss October 9 2008, 02:29:48 UTC
Thanks so much for reading...! ^_^

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ljkfantasy October 5 2008, 09:29:40 UTC
awesome, cant to see the next chapter, thks :D

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