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Coffee and Cigarettes - Part 1

Aug 22, 2011 04:22

Title: Coffee and Cigarettes
Pairing: GTop
Rating: PG-13
Genre: ar, angsty-ish
Warnings: yaoi obviously
Summary: A drunken Jiyong, cigarrettes and some coffee to come.
A/N: So this is going to be divided into two parts. It got a little longer than I intended.
Taken from a prompt by ymo1157. Hope you like it!
Prompt~ Addiction
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fanfiction: oneshot, pairing: gd/top, fic: archive

Comments 6

erikaoi August 22 2011, 12:21:23 UTC

More!update next part soon!

katie3863 August 22 2011, 13:38:04 UTC

Very interesting, if this was the fluff, kinda afraid of the angst

spot! dyealer August 22 2011, 21:19:38 UTC

owhh..poor SeungHyun, if only JiYong is not wasted, maybe they'll be going much Much MUCH further..but... -sigh-
SeungHyun is a good man and he know he love JiYong too much to let JiYong regret what he would have done..later on, in his sober state..
updateee..need the next part - I'll be waiting!! =DD

ext_655209 August 22 2011, 23:34:06 UTC

Wow!! I hope you update soon!! I want to see the next part!! ^.^ I kinda regret Ji was drunk *sigh* but anyway... i want to see the angst part -i love drama so yeah...-
I'll be waiting =P

atenais_pala August 23 2011, 03:35:07 UTC

I really like Seunghyun here. Somehow I think he would act the same way in the real life.

And the little details make everything more melancholically sweet. As Seung thinking about his loneliness, his thoughts about Jiyong, he hugging a toy at night (so cute).

I like your style, it's not a fluff full of joy, but it's very sweet. I can't wait to read the second part.
Thank you!