Redeeming Eden Chapter Twelve

Feb 02, 2008 10:42


Title: Redeeming Eden
Length: Chaptered
Rating: PG and growing
Pairings: YooSu, JaeHo, MinOther
Summary: Love, Hatred, Gratitude, Revenge. Is love worth all the pain they have to go through?


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underknight February 2 2008, 04:16:12 UTC
Forgive me...
But I really have a harrdd time to understand this fiction.
Yoosu are together now, but Yunho still have a thing or two for Su,
And how come Jae fill the picture? Who is he?

Wanna help me to understand? I am soorryyy,
They MUST be rich, look at those cars~

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seanix6amp February 2 2008, 16:40:21 UTC
No problem, if I confused you, I will explain. It's my duty here.

It first started with HoSu. Then Jang forced Yunho to leave Junsu. But Yunho and Junsu still love each other.
Now that its YooSu, Yunho still loves Junsu and Junsu still cannot completely stop loving Yunho.
Jaejoong is Junsu's senior in university and they met again when YooSu were hospitalised. Jae(doctor at the hospital) saw Yunho when he was visiting Junsu. And he feels intrigued by the other. This chapter shows how he was trying to control his interest in Yunho.

Hope this clears the messy relationship web here. =)

They ARE rich. Yunho and Yoochun are from rich families. Jae is a doctor and assistant director of the hospital. Junsu can be rich on his own too, he's a vet.
Think I haven't written a car for Changmin yet. Think of how much a lawyer can earn.. $$$

Cheers!

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seanix6amp February 2 2008, 17:36:25 UTC
Oops.. I have written a car for Min.
In the prologue. It's a black Jaguar XJR, just that I didn't post the pic.

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7ladies February 2 2008, 04:19:09 UTC
i'm guessing.
the 'him' is yoochun.
the 'her' is minsu.

and i have a feeling that the period of time where yunho and junsu are left alone, something would happen.

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seanix6amp February 2 2008, 16:47:08 UTC
Nope.. Not so...
'Him' will still be in the hospital after Yoochun gets discharged.
Min Sun is an innocent party. She just happens to be used by the brothers to get near Jang. She does not know of the plans at all.

Your feeling is right. They will be alone next chapter.

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moon1084 February 2 2008, 07:06:04 UTC
yeees an update! awesomeness! i want some jaeho dammit!
jae's car is like gagagaga!

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seanix6amp February 2 2008, 16:50:06 UTC
The JaeHo-ness will keep stepping in till they really get together. Promise!

The car is just like Jae's stare, so cold and intense. *Morphs into crazy fangirl mode - "Ahhh...!"

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moon1084 February 2 2008, 17:06:26 UTC
i am seriously loving your fic, your writing is wonderful! i like lukily came across it, i dont remember seeing it in jaeho_Detox.

and yea it is like jae's stare.

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seanix6amp February 2 2008, 17:19:42 UTC
Thanks thanks! Glad you like it.
I didn't post it in Jaeho_Detox cause the JaeHo here is not strong and will take some time to develop. Don't know if it would be appropriate.

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chloe1910 February 2 2008, 07:43:19 UTC
hm..and the plot thickens...

wow...to MinTei...even though they're not in love with each other...i'm glad that at least I know that MIn is not alone....

It's really interesting to see Jae getting interested (or maybe intrigued would be a better word) with Yunho...silently making sure that Yunho is ok in the shadow...I hope they cross path as in officially soon...
I wonder who's the him to Tei and who's the she to Min? Who's the one who's been helping Min to watch over Jang Ji Dong...

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seanix6amp February 2 2008, 17:01:28 UTC
I'm the typical JaeHo, YooSu type of person and I always feel sorry for Min that he's left alone.
So, I try. Though I have to confess early that he's not falling in love anytime soon this fic. *Pledge to give him true love next story... Yes, plot bunnies are hopping around in my brain.*

And Jae trying to control his interest for Yunho... Personally, I think that's just luring Murphy in.. Murphy's Law..
They will cross path.. next chapter.

'Him' is Tei's boyfriend. Min is Tei's lover here as in physically.
'Her' is a very important person in Min's plans. To be revealed in a couple of chapters more.

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chloe1910 February 2 2008, 17:36:17 UTC
me too..i'm the typical Jaeho, Yoosu group..I'm glad that you are pushing the Jaeho along.....slowly...

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seanix6amp February 2 2008, 17:41:15 UTC
A relationship built slowly over time and events will be strong.
Sadly, I think the YooSu here was formed in haste and the results might show later.

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irerd_taga February 2 2008, 09:20:02 UTC
Wow to your virgin smex! So Changmin's in it for the sexual gratification only eh, a no-strings-attached affair!
And poor Yunho, forced to get married while his heart is still with Junsu. Wonder why Jae was following Yunho but too hesitant to help out? Does he already have feelings for Yunho or is it just pity at this stage?
Hope they catch Ji Dong red-handed in time so that the engagement plans fall through.

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seanix6amp February 2 2008, 17:10:14 UTC
Both of them are in for the sexual gratification. I wanted to use 'no-strings-attached' too but then again they have the agreement to nail Jang together so its not exactly that.

Jae wasn't following Yunho, he just happened to see Yunho outside the pub. Being hesitant here is just part of Jae's character in this fic, not wanting to get involved in anything.
He's... kind of curious. Not love, just finds Yunho attracting him to find out more.

Don't worry, I'll try not to let them get engaged.

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