Title: Redeeming Eden Length: Chaptered Rating: PG and growing Pairings: YooSu, JaeHo, MinOther Summary: Love, Hatred, Gratitude, Revenge. Is love worth all the pain they have to go through?
omg that alley part was sooo sad! my jaeho and yoosu! but specially my jaeho. i felt bad for jae when i read this part "Jaejoong paid the bill and left the empty glass alone with the 2 tables. So, he figured things out. Whatever." he felt real sad
The alley part was killing me as I wrote. The others all cry when they feel sad, but Jae holds it all inside. He suffers in silence and pretends that it's all nothing. So much pain.
Junsu feels that he owes Yunho something. Yunho did so much to protect him. Su also thinks that being the successful person Chunnie is(with friends, career and family), it would be easier for him to find someone else to love. I know, I know.. Su is lying to himself. YooSu is so much love..
GOD DAMN IT seanix6amp!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh god, Why? Why? Why? WHY???????????????????????????????????? You had to go and torture Junsu, Chunnie and us!! Damn it! I somehow knew that something like this would happen when you made Junsu heard the truth last chapter....I just didn't know that you're gonna do it so fast!!!
I think Chunnie is the most pitiful one here....He's absolutely no idea what in the world is going on..this is truly a heartwrenching chapter..and the part where Junsu was quietly memorising's Yoochun's face and features as if it's the "end of the world" is truly breath taking....I was holding onto my breather when I read this part.
PS: God damn it woman! I'l throwing flying durians at you for the broken Yoosu and the never-got-the-chance-to-happen Yunjae!!!!! sob sob sob.. Oh god..I need to go and cry myself out now...
Ouch my Yoosu...Ouch my Yunjae and Ouch my heart...*hugs Chunnie* *hug myself*
Yo woman...could you put a link for all the chapters when this ends? I would like to mem this...and it's easier if all links for each and every chaps are in one post by itself!!!!
Erhm... I..er.. broke my own heart writing this! *dodges flying durians*
Junsu is a lot stronger than many think, that's why he managed to make the decision to do this. It's just that he's too stubborn and always bears the burden all by himself. Hurts other unknowingly in the process. And it's been quite long. He heard the truth in March, then decided that he would stay with Chunnie till after his birthday.
Now that you mention 'end of the world', I'm thinking life and death..Liv Tyler - Armageddon... Erh.. okay, not linked[please ignore]
Chunnie's kept in the dark because Su is trying to take more of the pain here. And I think Su is in more pain.
ah..I didn't notice the date there hehe..i never really did honestly..but thanks for clarifying...
NO DEATH for the main characters ok???!!!!! Or I'll haunt you till to the end of the world...
Though the Hosu is back together now..I feel that things are definately not the same any more...Some how, after your explanation, I felt that Junsu is back with Yunho out of obligation and to a certain point pity...cause what you said it's true, Yunho has no one else with him.... Moreover, I can feel that he loves Yoochun more than Yunho now...
I have a feeling that the Hosu will not be back together for long... the feelings is just not the same...
As for Jae..I have a feeling that Jae has fallen for Yunho too...he just might not realise it yet...*huggles Jae*
PS: I realised that "I have a lot of feeling" for this chapter huh?
I wouldn't say not authentic. Junsu does still love Yunho in a way but it is now different from the past, especially now that there is Yoochun. The alley scene.. just to bring back the HoSu.. Aiz..
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You did a really good job writing it. <33
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I kept 'Holding Back The Tears' as I was writing.. Breaking up YooSu almost killed me.
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The others all cry when they feel sad, but Jae holds it all inside. He suffers in silence and pretends that it's all nothing. So much pain.
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Have to put myself in... can't be cold to the world and write something as sad as that..
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Su also thinks that being the successful person Chunnie is(with friends, career and family), it would be easier for him to find someone else to love. I know, I know.. Su is lying to himself. YooSu is so much love..
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Oh god, Why? Why? Why? WHY???????????????????????????????????? You had to go and torture Junsu, Chunnie and us!! Damn it! I somehow knew that something like this would happen when you made Junsu heard the truth last chapter....I just didn't know that you're gonna do it so fast!!!
I think Chunnie is the most pitiful one here....He's absolutely no idea what in the world is going on..this is truly a heartwrenching chapter..and the part where Junsu was quietly memorising's Yoochun's face and features as if it's the "end of the world" is truly breath taking....I was holding onto my breather when I read this part.
PS: God damn it woman! I'l throwing flying durians at you for the broken Yoosu and the never-got-the-chance-to-happen Yunjae!!!!! sob sob sob.. Oh god..I need to go and cry myself out now...
Ouch my Yoosu...Ouch my Yunjae and Ouch my heart...*hugs Chunnie* *hug myself*
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Junsu is a lot stronger than many think, that's why he managed to make the decision to do this. It's just that he's too stubborn and always bears the burden all by himself. Hurts other unknowingly in the process.
And it's been quite long. He heard the truth in March, then decided that he would stay with Chunnie till after his birthday.
Now that you mention 'end of the world', I'm thinking life and death..Liv Tyler - Armageddon... Erh.. okay, not linked[please ignore]
Chunnie's kept in the dark because Su is trying to take more of the pain here. And I think Su is in more pain.
Noted. The links will appear last chapter.
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NO DEATH for the main characters ok???!!!!! Or I'll haunt you till to the end of the world...
Though the Hosu is back together now..I feel that things are definately not the same any more...Some how, after your explanation, I felt that Junsu is back with Yunho out of obligation and to a certain point pity...cause what you said it's true, Yunho has no one else with him.... Moreover, I can feel that he loves Yoochun more than Yunho now...
I have a feeling that the Hosu will not be back together for long... the feelings is just not the same...
As for Jae..I have a feeling that Jae has fallen for Yunho too...he just might not realise it yet...*huggles Jae*
PS: I realised that "I have a lot of feeling" for this chapter huh?
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The Yoosu scene in the alley was so heartbreaking T_T
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The alley scene.. just to bring back the HoSu.. Aiz..
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