Redeeming Eden Chapter Seventeen

Feb 24, 2008 04:47


Title: Redeeming Eden
Length: Chaptered
Rating: PG and growing
Pairings: YooSu, JaeHo, MinOther
Summary: Love, Hatred, Gratitude, Revenge. Is love worth all the pain they have to go through?

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ara_niey February 24 2008, 09:14:26 UTC
i bet all that junsu has in mind right now is;'this is all for the best'..
*sigh*
poor chunnie..i almost cried..almost..i guess i'm torn between yunnie and chunnie..(this is all because of the author brings yunjae a lot slower than i expected!XD)

why did jae seem like he didn't care that yunnie didn't show up?aish~i know he cares..or else he wouldn't be there and wait for yunnie for every single day,in the first place..in denial..*rolls eyes*

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seanix6amp February 24 2008, 14:47:05 UTC
It's the best that Junsu can do now..
Does it still hurt for Yunnie now because Junsu does not love him the same way as before?

Umm..YunJae.. It's HoSu now.. Give them a chance, please?
Jae has fallen for Yunho. Yes, it's denial again..

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ara_niey February 25 2008, 01:48:27 UTC
aish~i hate it when i can't edit my comments..*sigh*

ahh..don't get me wrong dear~
i really love hosu..i just feel sorry that junsu was doing all that because he had to,not because he wanted too..and of course yunnie knows about junsu and chunnie,but when afterwards he knew why junsu came back to him-
well,i guess yunnie deserved some love right now ne?~^_^

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seanix6amp February 25 2008, 22:33:40 UTC
I hate that too. Why, LJ, why? We can only delete the entire comment and re-post... Irritating..

Junsu knew he had to do that, but he wanted to do it too. It's the kind soul acting. Nobody but himself can make the decision to leave Yoochun.
Yup, let's just give Yunnie some love and deal with the rest later.

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moon0319 February 24 2008, 10:12:50 UTC
this chapter is so sad.. Yoosu seperated.. :( Su left Yoochun because he felt guilty. He loves Yunho but it's a different kind of love. Jaejoong is starting to realize that he missed Yunho

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seanix6amp February 24 2008, 14:56:02 UTC
It's not exactly guilt, that sounds like Su has done something wrong. He just has not done enough, he feels like he owes Yunho something. Mmm.. you remind me, maybe Su feels guilty AFTER leaving Yoochun.. *o*

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moon0319 February 24 2008, 16:56:22 UTC
it's sort of guilt. Su didn't do anything wrong but he felt guilty because he is happy but Yunho isn't. and he owes lots to Yunho.. And he could felt guilty now becauce he left Yoochun.. Wahh.. love triangle..

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seanix6amp February 24 2008, 21:56:50 UTC
*in deep thoughts, biting finger* Wow.. you figured it out! Yup, agree with you on the part of Su's guilt.
I added Jae to make it a love square, hope to make it into 2 happy pairs soon...

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7ladies February 24 2008, 12:10:55 UTC
as much as i love your yoosu here, i support hosu more....

damn....i'm in a dilemma

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seanix6amp February 24 2008, 15:00:57 UTC
Fear not! You can decide after seeing how the HoSu moves on.
Well... it's going to be more rollercoaster rides for the 4 of them.
Nope, sorry but the story is not going to end with HoSu... (-o-)

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zhyune February 24 2008, 13:03:56 UTC
*cries.I think something in me just died. poor chunnie! ;___; He doesn't even know what's happening and su just left him like that, after that hot sex and his declaration of love (with that ring). And I thought it would be all sweet and smootsailing after that but no! BAM! suddenly yoosu broke up.

but I kind of feel happy for yunho though. although he deserves more than love that originates from pity?

update soon! ♥ ♥

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seanix6amp February 24 2008, 15:09:24 UTC
To clarify.. Junsu did not let Yoochun touch his body because he was leaving. It is not a tradeoff. That was really an act of love. *thinks that the part where their tears dropped on the rings was the most beautiful scene here..*
Yes, Yoochun did so much for Junsu and this happened.. *sobs*

It's not pity. We are humans, and humans by nature are partly selfish. So that was partly for Yunho's undying love and partly because Junsu felt bad.

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zhyune February 26 2008, 05:50:34 UTC
love is selfish. *nods. but eventually yoosu will get back together. Yunho just needs time to sort things out with suu. thanks for clarifying! *looks forward to next chapter.
please update soon! yay I love your fic its really good!:D *hugs.

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seanix6amp February 26 2008, 21:43:36 UTC
No prob!

Glad you like it.. *hugs with YooSu between us* Aiz.. *dreams on*

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yunnie_ella February 24 2008, 14:03:05 UTC
oh, my god !!! this chapter really get my heart ...
especially the part where junsu choose to leave chunnie and back to yunho...
hope there will be a happy ending for all of them....

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seanix6amp February 24 2008, 15:11:38 UTC
I will try for the happy ending for... all of them..
Difficult.. but will try..

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