Redeeming Eden Chapter Twenty Three

Apr 06, 2008 13:58


Title: Redeeming Eden
Length: Chaptered
Rating: PG and growing
Pairings: YooSu, JaeHo, MinOther
Summary: Love, Hatred, Gratitude, Revenge. Is love worth all the pain they have to go through?

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moon1084 April 6 2008, 07:05:52 UTC
meeeee? i was like i wonder if she updated yet. and BAM! will come back to comment

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moon1084 April 6 2008, 07:15:12 UTC
awww poor yoosu are suffering for each other. omgosh is yoo going to come to su's rescue??

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seanix6amp April 6 2008, 14:31:00 UTC
Yoochun is going to want to save Junsu if or when he finds out. But whether or not he manages to save Su is another question...
Erhm, stay tuned???

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moon1084 April 6 2008, 17:02:09 UTC
boo you never have to tell me or remind me to stay in tune for this fic. your writing is addictive.

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forgivemealways April 6 2008, 07:23:49 UTC
ahhh why do you keep breaking my heart? I cried reading that scene where Junsu asked Yoochun to hold him...it was just so sad! well even though I might not be happy with the way chun acted towards Su i understand how he feels. Erghs Yoochun's fiance is that cutesy girl from xman huh? I never liked her because she tried way too hard to be cute. Minwoo is such a sweet guy...i secretly love how everyone loves Junsu in this story but then again Junsu is so hot who wouldn't want a piece of him? I hope the yoosu reconcile but actually to be honest I still want to see some more hosu I don't know why i find their love well their relationship sort of sweet even though deep down I'm rooting for Yoosu. I think it's just because yunho sacrificed so much that he deserves Junsu for a while longer but the yoosu definitely need to get back together. update soon!

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seanix6amp April 6 2008, 14:36:31 UTC
With the effects of alcohol, his love for Yoochun and the pain in his heart... Aiz, Su.. *sob* I almost cried too..

Agree with you on Eunbi, I totally dislike her too!

The HoSu/YooSu is still in a mess now and with Junsu lost in the mountains... I guess more time will be needed for them to sort things out..

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lmaii April 6 2008, 07:32:43 UTC
the yoosu interaction is killing me X__X

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seanix6amp April 6 2008, 14:37:59 UTC
Yes, stubborn as always...
Need them to go back to love again.. *o*

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junsu_sarang April 6 2008, 08:03:38 UTC
omgg u cant end there XOOO plz tell me u'll update tomorrow, or i'll die waiting wahhh XOO thanx for the update, this chap is heartbreaking <333

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seanix6amp April 6 2008, 14:40:21 UTC
Argh! Sorry to disappoint you but I haven't written that far yet.
Promise to update earlier next week though... *writes faster*

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irerd_taga April 6 2008, 08:17:58 UTC
I had a feeling Junsu was gonna go wandering into the snow mountains when I read the beginning of this chapter! And he did! The heartbroken fool!
And then I imagined that Yoochun's gonna panic once he hears of this news and go running into the mountains in search of Su. He'll find him after a lot of searching with Junsu near death and all that stuff *i'm rambling off*
Anyways can't wait to read what your version will be! hehehehe.....

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seanix6amp April 6 2008, 14:46:59 UTC
One thing led to another and.. he did.
Junsu didn't plan for that. He just like, lost his ability to think, being so brokenhearted and wandered off. The sensible, considerate Junsu would never do something like that.

A whole lot of people are going to panic when they find out he's missing and a lot of people are going to search.
Still thinking what should happen... Promise promise that Junsu comes out alive...

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