At some point, words and even this day
Has become buried in mistakes.

Dir en Grey
"Violating Rain"

THE VERY BASICS;

Name: Gaara Sabaku
Age: Sixteen.
DOB: January 13
Sign: Capricorn
Blood: AB
Meaning: AB is considered the worst blood type. In predictability-loving Japan, they're loose cannons. They also like to set their own ( Read more... )

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