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Interlude

Dec 28, 2008 11:39

Title: Interlude
Author: Jigoku Hikari
Pairing: SasuNaru
Rated NC-17/X. Period.
Fandom: Naruto
Warnings: M/M, yaoi, lemon, oral, anal, PWP. Smut in its purest form. =^-^=
Summary: Pressed up against the wall. Both hands trapped, pinned above my head with ease.

Disclaimer: Shall never own any character used in this fic. just use 'em for smut ( Read more... )

naruto, fanfiction, sasunaru

Comments 24

kim1982 December 28 2008, 18:02:46 UTC

Gah *tries to stop massive nosebleed* That was so freaking hot. OMG. Wow. I loved that you wrote it in first person. And the descrptions were amazing. It was very very intense. Very well written. I loved it! Totally added it to my memories!

seira_kuragari December 30 2008, 19:00:20 UTC

-hands over tissue box- XD

It's my first attempt at writing smut in first person, and I'm happy with the way it turned out. And I'm also happy that you like it. Definitely expect to see it again. XD

Thanks for the comment! <3

singloom December 28 2008, 18:39:24 UTC

So hot! I love how it was written in first person narrative (especially Naruto's :P.)

It was a very well written fic. I am so favving this :D

seira_kuragari December 30 2008, 19:02:13 UTC

Yeah, I couldn't imagine putting it in Sasuke's POV, so definitely went with Naruto's. It's the first time I've ever written smut in first person, so I'm glad you like it. X3

stoiclymanic May 29 2009, 05:46:08 UTC

I love your icon.

singloom May 29 2009, 11:24:08 UTC

Thank you! I'm a big Style fan :P

kintagi December 28 2008, 19:53:46 UTC

WOW! it's totally hot! I loved it! cheers!

seira_kuragari December 30 2008, 19:02:30 UTC

X3 <3 Thank youuuuu!!!

hitzusin December 28 2008, 20:33:27 UTC

Personally (and to be honest) I'm not a fan of first person writing, and very rarely read it, but I was intrigued and thought it was very well written for the style of choice. =3 Still not a fan of the 1st pov but that's just me lol. But like I said, it was very good. :D

seira_kuragari December 30 2008, 19:04:10 UTC

Well, even though you dislike first person, I'm happy you gave my fic a shot and liked it. Thanks for reading!!! <3

yukik4z3 December 28 2008, 21:04:37 UTC

Wow, this was a really hot one, and if I dare to say: one of the best sex-scenes ever written!
My love goes out to you!:D

A wonderful job!

seira_kuragari December 30 2008, 19:14:17 UTC

-gasp- ... you really honestly think it's one of the best?!?!? HOMG -huggles- Thank so much!!! <3 <3