"V" is for Victory

Oct 27, 2008 11:03

This is my ficlet contribution for the Jack Alpha Bits section of  SG-1 GenFic day.  I haven't written fic in months and I think this has stirred the muse.  It's a tag for Unending.

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He stood ramrod straight in the formation, the look on his face as frozen as the ship he stared at through the observation window. They would have ( Read more... )

jack alpha bits, gen fic day

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lilyleia78 October 29 2008, 06:28:11 UTC
Interesting 'what if' on the episode. Powerful emotion.

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sela21k October 30 2008, 00:09:29 UTC
That's why I love to write fan fiction - to explore the 'what ifs" especially about Jack. I'm glad you like it.

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shimmeringstar1 November 2 2008, 00:42:25 UTC
Beautiful fic, Sela.

Even though I know you wrote it for the JAB, it is the perfect (and possibly only) POV to show how the outside would've moved on, but Jack wouldn't and couldn't have....

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sela21k November 2 2008, 03:01:24 UTC
I wanted to show he would be just as frozen in time as his crew was. He wouldn't have been able to get emotionally past his team being lost to him.

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traycer_ November 3 2008, 00:44:13 UTC
I have yet to see this episode (as well as all the other season 10 episodes) but I got the gist of what was going on in this ficlet and my heart bleeds for poor Jack.

As if he could ever forget…

Just tear my heart out and take it with you why don't you? :) Beautiful story, Sela, as always!

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sela21k November 3 2008, 14:05:42 UTC
Thank you. I love writing Jack.

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