Deprivation [s/a]

[selectivelyurie]

Title: Deprivation
Author: selectivelyurie
Rating: R
Pairing: Ryan/Brendon (the one and only)
Summary: Somewhere between "Hi, I'm Brendon" and now...he and Ryan fell into this really strange relationship.
Disclaimer: Don't own, not true (or is it?)
Beta: alphabetatoast
Author Notes: This is meant to hurt. There is no happy ending, no life altering declarations of love, no

Comments

[kyasuriin]

nygh, that was hurty. Hurty but good.

[selectivelyurie]

thank you so much! i wanted it to hurt just a little, considering the entire brendon/ryan dynamic makes me sad sometimes :\

thank you so much for reading! ♥

[homonyymi]

Omg, this was so sad and kinda twisted and everything, but at the same time I found this kinda beautiful. : < And your writing style is very fascinating! 8)

[selectivelyurie]

thank you! for some reason, this theme really brought out a different style of writing for me; i've never written like this before. i really enjoyed it though :)

i think that's what i was trying to capture: how sad and twisted yet how beautiful ryan and brendon are. i'm hoping it wasn't all misery and woe; maybe you caught a little glimmer of hope in some of the wording ;)

again, thank you.

[redorchids]

Really good. I love the flow of this. Great job.

[selectivelyurie]

thanks, bb! :)

[mowglimoonshado]

This was beautifully written. Got to say though, it hurt.

[selectivelyurie]

thank you! this style of writing was different than what i'm used to so i really enjoyed it :)

yeah, it kind of makes me sad, too. but i'm a little strange in that i see some hope for them. they seem to have been through hell and back so what's a little band split to them? :)

[xxxrydenxxx]

[selectivelyurie]

awh, i'm sorry, bb :(

that's what i wanted this to be, so even if it did hurt, i'm glad i got that across. brendon and ryan have a very different relationship and i really wanted to capture that.

but thank you so much for reading :D