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[selfmadecritic]

I run through the neighborhood for 10 minutes or more, the cold air embracing me, and painting my cheeks crimson, brittle. I run until the pavement becomes very soft under my feet, and they sink into it, and then lift off, weightless.
I should go back. I shouldn't have left. That was stupid. Now they think I'm mad at them. I'm not mad at them. I

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[sixstepsleft]

Poser

[selfmadecritic]

I should have put the last line in quotations. It struck me.

[hernias]

This is quite possibly the best thing I've ever read from a computer screen.

[selfmadecritic]

I doubt that. Thank you, regardless.

[euphoric_hell]

Me, you, possibly other people, this week. It's an order.

[selfmadecritic]

Agreed.

[zestysteve]

how was morgan's? my coolant leak is not a good one...

[euphoric_hell]

Morgan's was great. It would have been a lot of fun if you could have joined us, but I bet Kev was glad he got to be a pimp. Sorry about your car trouble. If the weather get nicer, I can walk to your house sometime this week.

[vmprhk]

This was absolutely great

Thank you for writing it, I more than enjoyed reading it

I feel better, probably because I can relate to it.

Please write more of these

[selfmadecritic]

Duely noted.

[facadesbanned]

I love you Colin. Even when you are a silly irresponsible boy. I really do, I love you. I know so many good writers.