Unfinsihed song...help Clint

[sen31]

Hey buddy...I know you are out there in cyber-land. Need help finishing a song. Need your input. I am stuck for an ending

Comments

[mrrightnow]

Just give it a bridge and a guitar solo, like GnR when they couldn't think of an ending.

I'm thinking something cautiously optimistic, but doomed to fail. Like this, maybe:

And when you stray from your heart,
I'll find you again.
And when you turn from your future,
We can re-begin.
You'll never make it alone,
Just remember how it's been
I'll take you into my arms,
I know we can do this,
I know we can,
I know we can

We have to...

[sen31]

You kind of hit it on the head there. The whole song was/is about a couple on the verge of a breakup and trying to sort it out. I like it.