Sen Beret's Anniversary Meme!

[senberet]

It's actually been a year and two months since I became involved with the fandom, but hey, who's counting?

Masterlist

rules

• comment on this post with your prompts! all prompts are welcome (be as vague or detailed as you'd like!) as long as they fit with the theme of sneezy/sick/allergic Sam, Dean, Castiel, John, etc.
• reply to prompts with your

Comments

This one is mostly for SenBeret (can I do that?)

[sexualoddity]

I really enjoyed the third person fic 'Concentration', but I found myself wanting to see the caretaking and stuff that followed the hunt. Continuation? From either Sam or Dean's perspective?

hell yeah you can do that!!

[senberet]

i've been thinking about this since you said it back on the forum! so i guess i have no choice but to do it now, right? (i'm on it. i'm so on it. and THANK YOU!)

Re: hell yeah you can do that!!

[sexualoddity]

Yay! :D

FILLED: Epilogue

[senberet]

“Alright, Sammy, what gives?”

“Huh?” Sam’s rubbing his hair with a cheap motel room towel in an attempt to dry it, having gotten soaked during the walk from the library to the impala, and then again from the car to the room. As a result (of either the rain or something else), he hasn’t stopped shivering since he was hit with the library ghost’s stupid curse in the first place.

“The ladder’s barbequed, man, curse is over. And we’re out of the dusty library. I know it wasn’t just allergies back there, so are you going to give in and let me dose you up or what?”

“I’ll do it,” Sam mumbles begrudgingly, hanging on to whatever dignity he feels the need to protect. Then, he adds, “I’m fine, Dean. It’s just - hp’ISHCHuh! - just a cold,” as he starts to get up to search through their first aid kit for their half-empty bottle of NyQuil. Instead, he stumbles over his own feet and knocks himself back into the desk chair

Re: FILLED: Epilogue

[sexualoddity]

Awww yeah! This is exactly what I wanted. :) I like that I have an idea of what's gonna happen, and it's not gonna be easy but Dean is gonna be there. I like that he worried about the curse latching on to Sam, but really Sam just needs a bit of TLC, and I love the idea of the curse letting the virus take a hold of Sam. Plus, all the things like sneezing interrupting speech and Sam being all shivery and feverish but all tough about it are just lovely. Thank you so much for this!

Re: FILLED: Epilogue

[anilkex1]

I love how Sam had to finally admit that it wasn't the library, he was just getting sick. He's all..'I'm fine' and Dean's all 'yeah riiiight'. I simply suuuuck at spelling out the sneezing, and you do it so easily.

I loved this line:

"And Dean can see the brightness in his brother's eyes that warns of an impending fever"

I also loved Dean chiding Sam. The word choice is specific - he isn't scolding, but there's a little "tsk tsk" in it.

:D :D :D

Re: FILLED: Epilogue

[senberet]

wow, thank you! characterization has always been tricky for me (in all of the fandoms i've been in -- maybe i'm just particular...) so that part about the word choice means a lot to me since that's exactly what i was trying to do!

spelling them out is maybe just something that takes practice and exposure! or you just have to envision the sound in your head and then type it out phonetically!