Comments | senpaimitsuji: Venus as a Boy

senpaimitsuji

Venus as a Boy

Aug 21, 2012 17:10

exo/kaisoo(sudo)/one-shot/3k/pg-13/au

title taken from bjork's venus as a boy

( Kyungsoo looks over at the doll apologetically, the slightest tremble in his bottom lip. “I was selfish….” )

sudo, venus as a boy, fic, pg-13, 3k, one-shot, exo, au, kaisoo

Comments 23

This is a comment awzmpreci August 21 2012, 22:29:09 UTC

Is "what" an emotion?
It has to be because I'm sure that's what I'm feeling rn.
aaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Re: This is a comment senpaimitsuji August 21 2012, 22:49:45 UTC

omg precious

is this a good what

Re: This is a comment awzmpreci August 22 2012, 00:00:53 UTC

Yes

Re: This is a comment senpaimitsuji September 5 2012, 03:49:02 UTC

okay good thanks

finedayforfools August 21 2012, 22:59:36 UTC

I told you I thought this story was cute but that really doesn't cover it omg?
Your characterization of Kyungsoo was really, really lovely and I felt for him and he's just so cute gosh (not just irl but in your fic). The amount of thought you put into the tiniest of details is really great and it really makes the story. I really enjoy your writing style. The tone was unemotional as the story needed without sounding dull and clinical.
And I'm sorry for harassing you with questions about every little thing even when you didn't ask me!!! It was out of love is2g! pls write lots and lots of things and tell me about them thank u

senpaimitsuji September 5 2012, 03:50:43 UTC

<3 oh my god thank you gen <3

oh no no no you didn't harass me omg you were a huge help tbh!

this fic wouldn't be a fic if you hadn't helped me out with your questions<3

anonymous August 21 2012, 23:25:10 UTC

hhhh i rly rly rly rly liked it!!!! i liked the difference between the sober voice of the journalist or reporter or w/e is and how naive but still realistic kyungsoo was! lars and the real girl is one of my favorite movies so i automatically got kinda attached~ to this idk and u executed the idea rly well w/o it becoming ridiculous or mocking (which is rly easy when it comes to things like this)so yeah good!!! great!! amazing even!!!! ah i rly want to write more in-depth but super tired so i apologize for how short this is ;_; this fic deserves better tbh.

senpaimitsuji September 5 2012, 03:51:34 UTC

this was more than enough omg ;_;

so sweet & kind

<3

neige_douce August 22 2012, 03:48:34 UTC

omg that was...... very unique style of telling kyungsoo's life... and i was quite awestruck at that hehehehe i love thisssssss!! ;~;

senpaimitsuji September 5 2012, 03:51:50 UTC

:)

thank you for reading!!

athasshirabu August 22 2012, 13:14:39 UTC

Oh wow.
Wow.
This kind of writing is kind of new to me and I can say that I liked it! 8D
The way you involved suho and kyungsoo's mother too :D
I liked it, thanks for writing ♥

senpaimitsuji September 5 2012, 03:53:18 UTC

yay, i'm glad you liked it!

thank you for reading <33