post #13

[seoulfulness]

Fics ( #12).

How Hard Was That? GLAM, Zinni/Trinity
Safehouse SNSD, Taeyeon/Seohyun
Intriguing Secret, Hyosung/Sunhwa [warning: murder]
Six and Seven Girl's Day, Minah/Hyeri
Approved Block B/B.A.P., Jaehyo/Himchan
Fiction EXO, Kai/Suho
Untitled Infinite, Myungsoo/Sungyeol
One Sequin at a Time EXO, Suho/Kai
Why don't we measure the coefficient of

Comments

infinite, any pairing

[anonymous]

http://kamilunafox.tumblr.com/post/30922313759/in-the-words-of-nathan-from-misfits-thats-cock (nsfw)

hydrogen in our veins (1/2), infinite, sungjong/hoya

[anonymous]

written for this prompt and k_b square: virginity/celibacy. unedited for now. concrit much appreciated ♥Sungjong usually considers himself averse to being on his hands and knees, but for Hoya, he makes an exception. Hoya pushes in the long silicone toy from behind, one widening segment at a time, and he finds himself whimpering each time it catches around the stretched and tender rim of his entrance. Hoya has always been gentle-too gentle-unless ordered otherwise, but this is the first time Sungjong’s done this particular activity with another and the strangeness dissuades him from it. He rolls his hip, inviting more in until there’s nothing left but the plug, breathy gasps already reduced to nothing more than incoherency. “I can’t wait to fuck myself on your cock,” Sungjong murmurs. The grip around his own tightens. “Fuck, Hoya. Choose one and hurry up already

hydrogen in our veins (2/2), infinite, sungjong/hoya

[anonymous]

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“More than I can describe,” Hoya agrees. Sungjong sits up straighter, attentive, but he doesn’t say more. It’s an unfortunate given that, no matter how cruelly Sungjong teases him, Hoya wouldn’t ever act on his own unless explicitly told.

So he does. “What I’m saying is I want you to move.” And this- yes, this is the Hoya he loves, beyond the shyness: manly and rough and with all the charisma that shines the brightest on stage, in these stolen moments shining brightly for him alone. Shallow initial thrusts become deeper, surer, and the embers of that abstraction roar into life again as Sungjong moans, high and thin and wanting. But this is the first time, and it isn’t quite scorching

Re: hydrogen in our veins (2/2), infinite, sungjong/hoya

[anonymous]

not the op, but i really enjoyed this, anon. there isn't nearly enough good hojong out there, and an even more drastic lack of good hojong porn, but you did a really great job with both their individual characters and the depiction of their relationship dynamics. it was admittedly a little too saccharine for my tastes at the end, but more because of your prose than because of the action of the story... i really liked the image of the two of them sitting watching TV after sex, just being together, caring for each other, not having to put a label on their relationship. it's really in-line with how i see them! ♥ tl;dr i enjoyed this~ thanks for sharing!!

Re: hydrogen in our veins (2/2), infinite, sungjong/hoya

[anonymous]

thank you for taking the time to reply! so thoughtfully, too. i'm glad you liked their dynamic: honestly, the personalities of these two are the most elusive given their relative quietness and consistency of personae. all the others just exhibit one or the other, imo

Re: hydrogen in our veins (2/2), infinite, sungjong/hoya

[shelly_cure]

oh, please can you share those links you talked about? And I really liked your fics. Also, I'd love to read more of your analysis of Sungjong personality, I found your point of view really interesting, I think is the first time I read such a detailed one. Actually I'd love to read your analysis of Sungjong's relationship with the other members too, not just with Hoya.

op!

[anonymous]

thank you so much for this \o/!!! i love hoya with sungjong best and i think their dynamics really, really work here. so well. i really like how you've characterized sungjong too: he's gritty and pushy, without any of the usual cutesy fare that writers can saddle him with. he just feels so real. hoya intrigues me here too, because he seems so malleable but perhaps it's only because he's with sungjong. as for crit, i think this piece end a lot more powerfully if you left out the last sentence because it makes it a little too saccharine sweet.

but everything else is spot on: the premise, the emotions, the characterizations and of course, the reply1997 link. thank you much, once again ♥!

Re: op!

[anonymous]

oh, it's you. :') ia completely with your assessment that sungjong's usually characterised as being far too cutesy. i mean, he can be, in private as well as public, but this is the guy that, when questioned about his reading list in interviews, cites powerful and mature literature like the one on the institutional sexual abuse of deaf students in gwangju. he is far more than just the exaggerated maknae character he wears on television. aaand i'll stop this tangent before i get swept away (again) in the relentless tide of all these ~feels

Re: op!

[anonymous]

i mean 'sweet' in a very cliched way, sorry! it's the equivalent to phrasing it like 'running away into the sunset together' and it works for some people but i feel it takes away from how real everything was set up to be.

but yes, you obviously have very clear insights about these characters so i hope you shall write more :D like i've said before, you have a really distinct way of writing and i hope to see more of it

o/♥

Re: op!

[anonymous]

oh i can see what you're talking about. tbh it's somewhat embarrassing, but at least now i can be more careful in the future.

you're so lovely :) we'll see, haha, but i hope so too! i'm slowly working on several fics. is there anything - situation or pairing - you want to see in particular? smutty or otherwise.