Business as Usual

[septemberoses]

Title: Business as Usual
Author: septemberoses
Fandom: True Blood
Rating: R for sexing, interior decor cliché (flokati), impure thoughts, Eric, Swedish slurs, unsavory details, angst
Characters: Eric/Godric
Word Count: 4,100
Summary: Will Godric be saved by the love of September Rose, a human girl with magical powers?  JUST KIDDING. Actually,

Comments

[bloodthirstylt]

Wow, I loved this. I rather enjoyed the side story with the people that worked for Eric and Godric too. I really felt for Gerrit...I am such a softy *laughs*

Okay I almost died laughing at the stuff with Eric being there to make sure that Godric popped the boys cherry in accordence with Swedish laws-that was fantastic and just so great.

I would love to see a continuation of what Godric does to the boy and the aftermath with Eric. yum!

[septemberoses]

I felt terrible for Gerrit too ... so this means it works. Because I was trying to give them some depth and dimension. In that: we can love Godric/Eric, and it's fun to porn them, but it's set against this gruesome background.

I don't know how much you've wandered in my journal, but if you click on the NC17 tag there's plenty of G/E fics.

[moon_lover68]

Great writing as always. You always know how to mix complete horror with burst out laughing lines.

[septemberoses]

........... and that's a ringing endorsement, horror with burst out laughing lines. I don't know why that appeals to me so much, but it does. Because vampires really are horrifying, right? I love trying to find the limits there -- sweetness, or humor, and still that menace. Thanks for commenting.

[zetaori]

I love this!
Grumpy and, at the same time, horny Eric is one of the best things I've read so far.
And I'm friending you because I think you're awesome :)

[septemberoses]

Hey, thanks. Horny Eric is all over my fanfics, btw. I think NC17 is my most used tag.

[gruochrua]

Okay, that summary just about killed me. Seriously, I choked on my toast while I was reading it. It's really hard to eat and laugh at the same time.

I absolutely adore the characters you create. They're all so real, for lack of a better term. There are about a hundred different things about this fic that I love, but the Karl and Gerrit portions just really got to me.

[septemberoses]

Talk to me, bb. I almost inflicted this on you for beta, but I know you're beta for Havocs Roman already and I figured that was plenty. This was a somewhat different writing style ... and I kept adding and deleting the last section, the one with Karl and the ring. I couldn't decide whether there was too much contrast in tone between the Karl/Gerrit stuff and the Godric/Eric stuff. I sometimes veer wildly between humor and horror.

I felt I should warn for flokati :) .... well, you and I had that conversation, didn't we? I hate writing those damn summaries. So I wrote all that as a joke, a place-holder, and then thought, screw it.

[keenoled]

Gawd, poor Jens... Stupid, stupid Gerrit...

[septemberoses]

How did I miss these comments? This story made me sad.