Copenhagen, Scene 7

May 12, 2011 20:23

Title: Copenhagen, Scene 7
Author: Septemberoses
Fandom: True Blood/En Forelskelse crossover
Characters: Carsten/Eric/(Godric)
Rating: PG
Summary:  Is our favorite XXL Viking brave enough to face down an angry mother so he can have more kinky sex with his fun-sized Danish boy?  This is Part 2 of 2 (part 1 was Copenhagen, Scene 6.) 
Word Count:  4 ( Read more... )

rating: pg, pairing: eric/carsten, fanfiction

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bloodthirstylt May 13 2011, 05:58:34 UTC
Oh man, Eric with Carsten's mom was sooo amusing. I loved it and Godric walking by.

Plus Carsten thinking all those naughty things about them both and trying to not get hard.

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septemberoses May 13 2011, 13:13:33 UTC
Carsten's a horndog, but hey -- he's a seventeen-year-old boy, all they think about is sex anyway....

Carsten will be meeting Godric again at the hotel, don't you think?

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berthablue May 13 2011, 09:32:40 UTC
That was great! At the end of the day, vampire, human, gay, straight... this is really just mom wanting to protect her little boy :) I'm guessing she'd turn the mom-rage on Eric without a second thought if he EVER hurt Carsten!

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septemberoses May 13 2011, 13:15:11 UTC
It really WAS about mom and her kid. And as such, sweet. It was interesting trying to think how his mom (ANY normal mom) would feel about Vampire Eric with her son.

There was a porny bit but it changed the tone of the fic a lot, I decided to make it a separate part. Glad you're enjoying it.

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chocolate_jive May 13 2011, 13:35:41 UTC
this was...giggle-inducing.Which is strange for this series, because usually, it's just incredibly sexy and thought-stopping.
I love Carsten's mum. She's just like my mum: Overly protective, but open-minded when you work with her guidelines instead of against them.

He must have. Carsten thinks about that drop of Godric's blood, the way the two vampires seemed to get pleasure from his eating. Are they still connected that way? Carsten closes his eyes and swirls his tongue around his scoop of coffee ice cream like he's giving the world's greatest blowjob, puts his heart and mind into it. Next to him Eric makes a small choking sound deep in his chest. Carsten opens his eyes and smiles. Godric's come to a standstill.
Just, funny. So, so very funny. I'm all for another threesome. (I do wonder how The Mom will react to that, though. Her son, his vampire boyfriend AND his maker who's basically her sons doppelgänger? This is getting interesting!)

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septemberoses May 13 2011, 23:12:02 UTC
Giggle-inducing -- good, that's what I was aiming for. And you're right, that's not the usual tone, but the idea of Carsten's mom and this general conversation has been in the back of my mind for ages. It's really fun to think of "real life" inside the vampire construct -- what WOULD you do if you found out your son was hooking up with a vampire? Even if you considered yourself liberal and pro-vampire?

It took me forever to get Godric and Carsten in bed together, because Carsten kept freaking out and running away...

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withoutcolor May 13 2011, 15:45:40 UTC
Carsten's mother is fantastic - going toe to toe with Eric Northman and not losing your shit? Heck yea, mom. I loved the way Eric plays it out with her and how Carsten squirms - a sign of fun things to come I hope!

And I loved Godric's cameo, very subtle. If mom only knew.

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septemberoses May 13 2011, 23:14:36 UTC
I tried out different scenarios in my head -- trying to put myself in mom's shoes, and then in Eric's. On the one hand, I think she'd be legitimately furious. On the other -- Carsten's seventeen in my fic. The larger issue (I hope this doesn't sound pretentious) is Carsten's mom being confronted with the fact that her son is, essentially, a man. He's going to do what he wants, and she has limited control over that. That's got to suck for a parent.

Yeah, Godric. Heh. I need to get working on the part I took out :)

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withoutcolor May 16 2011, 13:17:54 UTC
I don't think you sound pretentious at all, I think you conveyed the mother/son relationship and what happens when your nearly adult son makes choices you don't agree with. It's a delicate balance. Interesting to look at such a normal issue being thrust into such a very bizarre situation/world. Vampires and moms don't play out very often, but in reality I bet they'd have to, your scenario is a case in point to that.

Anyways, well done as always my dear! Can't wait for the porny bit, haha :)

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vanillefax May 13 2011, 18:46:29 UTC
Carsten's mom is pretty amazing. I admire her and the relationship she has with her son. She must have been a stronghold in Carsten's life and surely will continue to be. Carsten is one lucky boy! :D
I really like the way the whole encounter went. She was as outspoken as Eric and he was taking her seriously without trying to suck up to her.

Carsten thinks about that drop of Godric's blood, the way the two vampires seemed to get pleasure from his eating. Are they still connected that way? Carsten closes his eyes and swirls his tongue around his scoop of coffee ice cream like he's giving the world's greatest blowjob, puts his heart and mind into it. Next to him Eric makes a small choking sound deep in his chest. Carsten opens his eyes and smiles. Godric's come to a standstill. Carsten sucks on his cone again, thinking, glances at Eric, who's staring off in the middle distance with a look of intense concentration on his face.

So HOT! *fans self*

He wants Godric to fuck him while Eric watches. *ohgodmetoo ( ... )

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septemberoses May 13 2011, 23:19:03 UTC
I love Carsten's mom. I only ever wanted to write her because I figure she's got to be pretty great, since Carsten's so great himself. And yes -- I tried out (and ultimately rejected) Eric doing the whole turn-on-the-charm thing in favor of his being kind of a pragmatic realist, which is the way I mostly write him. He wasn't a total bastard about it, in his way he was trying to be nice, he knows how important Carsten's mom is to Carsten. But in the end, Carsten's seventeen, not twelve. She can't win, you know?

Yeeeeaaaaaaahhhh, stay tuned for the porny bit I lopped off the end of this fic because it changed the tone so much. I wanted this to be sweet. But I have to make the ficlet bigger.

That whole blood-exchange thing I think (?) I pretty much made up, having not read most of the CH books. But if they can feel each other's emotions, why can't that extend a bit further to food? I admit part of it is my feeling incredibly sorry for vampires that they can't eat, weird as that sounds. I think food would be a huge kink for

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