Comments | serafina19: The Longer You Run (26/28)

serafina19

The Longer You Run (26/28)

Mar 13, 2014 23:26

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fanfiction, title: the longer you run, oliver queen, chloe sullivan, multi-chapter, smallville

Comments 28

kachica March 15 2014, 05:35:08 UTC

Great update, Sera! I really enjoyed it.

serafina19 March 16 2014, 21:22:38 UTC

Thanks!

artgirltx March 15 2014, 05:52:18 UTC

Such a good scene between Chloe and Jimmy.

Her hand was on the doorknob, but she heard Jimmy say from behind her, “Well, I'm glad you stopped by Chloe.” If nothing else, he was glad to get the cufflinks back, but this was something he and Chloe needed. While the timing was a little suspect, he was glad to get it over with before he officially moved forward with this stage of his life.

What. A. Dick. That whole thought process of his just seems selfish and callous.

And only two more chapters....

serafina19 March 16 2014, 21:24:37 UTC

Thanks! I admit, not quite what I wanted to accomplish with that excerpt, but I can see where you're coming from.

Yep. Only two chapters. Kind of hard to believe, but this will feel good to finish.

artgirltx March 17 2014, 03:09:01 UTC

lol. I may have been projecting a little there. Broken hearts are the worst.

serafina19 March 17 2014, 04:13:19 UTC

That's understandable. I can't actually speak from experience because my personal dating experience is pretty much non-existent, but I'm sure they're the worst.

chlollifan84 March 15 2014, 17:50:57 UTC

I loved this chapter, it was great seeing Chloe getting closure. Now they can have a new start.
I'm so excited!! I can't wait to see the dinner!!

serafina19 March 16 2014, 21:27:34 UTC

Thanks! Chloe had been avoiding closure in a lot of things, but getting a fresh start is looking to be worth it.

Next chapter is just about ready, I just need to edit a few things.

escapist90 March 16 2014, 08:42:50 UTC

Chloe overthinking and being nervous. I liked it.
Really great chapter! The Chloe/Jimmy convo was needed.

serafina19 March 16 2014, 21:28:33 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.

faby87 March 16 2014, 14:16:07 UTC

Oh no evil... you can't leave us right now!!
I loved this chapter so much, I'm so happy that Chloe has finally closed Jimmy's chapter , and I really hope that during this dinner both finally find the courage to admit what always has been there between them.
I can't wait, I hope you don't make us suffer too much with the wait
Thanks :)

serafina19 March 16 2014, 21:29:46 UTC

Unfortunately for you, I did. But I have a feeling next chapter will make up for it. I'm thinking that it should be up later this week.

Thanks for leaving feedback! I appreciate it.