Leave a comment

Comments 28

irenewayne March 17 2014, 08:32:20 UTC
Great chapter! It's really nice that Chloe realized she needed to go see Jimmy and speak her mind in order to move forward. What I love the most is when she says "Not as good as it should, but maybe it will one day" after he asks if she feels better now. Because the truth is, closure is never what we imagine it to be, and is never as definitive as it sounds. It's more about starting the process of letting yourself move on from something, which is exactly what Chloe is doing here, and I love how you wrote it ( ... )

Reply

serafina19 March 20 2014, 02:35:30 UTC
Thank you! After everything she had gone through, talking to Jimmy was an important step. I love what you said about closure, because it's so true and I'm glad that you enjoyed the way I wrote it.

Actually, you're not giving him a hard time here at all. That vulnerability was the spark he needed from her. Trust me, he's done waiting for signs.

I'm happy that you're looking forward to the next chapter. Hopefully will be up soon.

Reply


sv_chlollie_fan March 28 2014, 02:14:00 UTC
Omg,I can't believe I missed so many chapters and I was thinking about wating till you finish this story,but my curiosity got the better of me ( ... )

Reply

serafina19 April 13 2014, 20:56:11 UTC
Sorry, I must have missed this comment somehow, but I hope you're okay with me replying now.

With Chlollie, nothing ever comes easy, but when the circumstances are right, everything feels worth it.

I understand the disappointment. I probably should have been a less subtle with Oliver calling Chloe, but this is such an unfamiliar territory, which is why I give him a bit of a pass. When he gets that message, it's that little push that he had been waiting for and he wasn't going to miss it.

I wanted to ensure that all areas of closure were covered, and Jimmy was a big part of that. To an extent, so was the Chlark scene, so I'm glad that you enjoyed that too!

Reply


hellzz_on_earth April 8 2014, 23:37:08 UTC
It's not just dinner Chloe. This is dinner with Oliver girl and yes he flew all the way from Star City to see you. That definitely means something woo woo.
Thanks for sharing.

Reply

serafina19 April 13 2014, 20:57:12 UTC
Well, sometimes the lies we tell ourselves are what keep us sane... but as you know, it's obviously isn't just dinner.

Reply


Leave a comment

Up