I had that silly grin on my face during most of this chapter. I'm so glad to see them back together. And they seems so happy!!! I'm a bit sad that there's only one chapter left. This story is really amazing.
“I’m really glad that everything worked out for you.” “Almost,” Oliver replied, staring intently at her
“Of course you call her Betty,” she said, as she turned back to him, not surprised that he had completely charmed her neighbour. Heck, Mrs. Yates probably got a kick out of it.
The whole time, Chloe watched wordlessly while Oliver spoke with her cousin. Initially, she thought he was nuts to want to talk to Lois while the bulge in his pants was far from discrete, but then she realized that was kind of the point. However, her surprise quickly transferred to his last comment as Oliver began to approach her. "You think that you're that good?" "I think what matters here is that you know I am,"
she felt hands encircle her waist, pulling her body back towards a familiar chest. “You’re ruining my master plan,” Oliver whispered as he kissed her neck. “Hmm?” “Do tell.” “Coffee in bed…” Oliver's head tilted up slightly so that he could whisper, “Other things in bed.” Chloe laughed The Lois/Oliver interaction was funny too
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I always love when you highlight parts because I find it interesting to see what stands out. There's something about Oliver saying Almost that has so much power to me, as I'm pretty sure I've used it three times in my fics, but I'm glad you agree in this case.
As usual, Mrs. Yates' inclusion came out of nowhere, as did the last scene actually, so it's rewarding to know that you enjoyed those parts.
The Lois/Oliver conversation was also needed, no matter how brief it was. There needed to be that silent understanding between the two if him and Chloe were to have any peace.
I am in a state of denial! I really can not believe that one of the most amazing stories I've ever read is about to end. I can not put together the ideas, I'm so excited and delighted by the way in which they were their reunification. It 'was a simple conversation, outspoken (this time they have been both), without hiding behind the fears that they had been limited so far. Ollie took a big risk leaving Star City but this was probably the choice that made Chloe aware. She was the most important thing for him! The interlude with Lois is nothing short of amazing, that girl really lends itself to exhilarating scenes like this ..... and Ollie seems to have really enjoyed embarrass her. Evening, I understand that the next chapter will be really hard to post for you, as for me it will be difficult to read
Aw thanks! That is high praise that I truly appreciate.
Their story has been far from simple, but oddly, that was what I wanted for this conversation. For Chlollie, they have to say what they mean, the words have to be simple to get the message through.
Leaving his hometown says volumes to Chloe, as well as the timing, but for Oliver, it's the least he could do. That's probably the clincher for her, knowing that he doesn't see the move as a big thing as long as she's in his life.
Yeah, Lois is always fun to write, and I had to have a little something to show that she was accepting of Oliver being back.
I hope you enjoy what I have left. It will be hard to finish this story, but I'm proud of what I've posted.
I've been waiting for this chapter for a long time and I'm so happy right now, they are finaly together and I have this stupid smile that can't go away. And the scene with Lois so funny, I imagined her face poor girl hahahahah. Now I would love to see Ollie and Chloe in a first public date, possibly with the paparazzi who snap a thousand photos and make a thousand questions about their love....I'm so happy that I'm dreaming of a thousand scenarios with open eyes at the moment, forgive me :) Thank you so much for this wonderful chapter. I'm very fond of this story and I still can't believe it's going to end, I was hoping there were yet another chapter plus the epilogue, but I seemed to understand that there will be just another? Maybe a sequel plese??? So sad. Thanks again :)
I'm glad. It's always good to know that the payoff leaves people smiling. Lois had to make one more appearance here because it's only a matter of time before Ollie's presence in Metropolis gets announced and well... they did have a deal.
I don't know about a sequel, because I don't have any storylines in mind. I will say this, I am seriously thinking about breaking off my last scene into an epilogue, depending on how long it is and that 'date' you described... sort of happens. I'm hoping that will suffice.
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I'm a bit sad that there's only one chapter left. This story is really amazing.
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed this story because it's been a fun one to write for me.
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“I’m really glad that everything worked out for you.”
“Almost,” Oliver replied, staring intently at her
“Of course you call her Betty,” she said, as she turned back to him, not surprised that he had completely charmed her neighbour. Heck, Mrs. Yates probably got a kick out of it.
The whole time, Chloe watched wordlessly while Oliver spoke with her cousin. Initially, she thought he was nuts to want to talk to Lois while the bulge in his pants was far from discrete, but then she realized that was kind of the point. However, her surprise quickly transferred to his last comment as Oliver began to approach her.
"You think that you're that good?"
"I think what matters here is that you know I am,"
she felt hands encircle her waist, pulling her body back towards a familiar chest. “You’re ruining my master plan,” Oliver whispered as he kissed her neck.
“Hmm?” “Do tell.”
“Coffee in bed…” Oliver's head tilted up slightly so that he could whisper, “Other things in bed.” Chloe laughed The Lois/Oliver interaction was funny too ( ... )
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As usual, Mrs. Yates' inclusion came out of nowhere, as did the last scene actually, so it's rewarding to know that you enjoyed those parts.
The Lois/Oliver conversation was also needed, no matter how brief it was. There needed to be that silent understanding between the two if him and Chloe were to have any peace.
Hopefully you enjoy the conclusion.
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I really can not believe that one of the most amazing stories I've ever read is about to end.
I can not put together the ideas, I'm so excited and delighted by the way in which they were their reunification.
It 'was a simple conversation, outspoken (this time they have been both), without hiding behind the fears that they had been limited so far.
Ollie took a big risk leaving Star City but this was probably the choice that made Chloe aware. She was the most important thing for him!
The interlude with Lois is nothing short of amazing, that girl really lends itself to exhilarating scenes like this ..... and Ollie seems to have really enjoyed embarrass her.
Evening, I understand that the next chapter will be really hard to post for you, as for me it will be difficult to read
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Their story has been far from simple, but oddly, that was what I wanted for this conversation. For Chlollie, they have to say what they mean, the words have to be simple to get the message through.
Leaving his hometown says volumes to Chloe, as well as the timing, but for Oliver, it's the least he could do. That's probably the clincher for her, knowing that he doesn't see the move as a big thing as long as she's in his life.
Yeah, Lois is always fun to write, and I had to have a little something to show that she was accepting of Oliver being back.
I hope you enjoy what I have left. It will be hard to finish this story, but I'm proud of what I've posted.
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Thank you so much for this wonderful chapter. I'm very fond of this story and I still can't believe it's going to end, I was hoping there were yet another chapter plus the epilogue, but I seemed to understand that there will be just another? Maybe a sequel plese??? So sad.
Thanks again :)
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I don't know about a sequel, because I don't have any storylines in mind. I will say this, I am seriously thinking about breaking off my last scene into an epilogue, depending on how long it is and that 'date' you described... sort of happens. I'm hoping that will suffice.
Thanks for the feedback.
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