Inner Demons - Chapter 59

Dec 10, 2012 00:00

Title:Inner Demon (sequel to Starting Over)

Chapter 59/60: Decisions

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Review lord_spyridon December 10 2012, 07:19:08 UTC
Oh s***! I wonder what Harry is going to do now? Kind of scary that Harry was thinking about those possibilities. I just wonder if he's going to tell Ginny about it once he gets out? Plus I wonder if Ginny will be the one to find the breakthrough that brings Harry and Scott back home? And are we going to see Harry and George rediscover their friendship again?

I wonder if Ginny's thoughts when she sees Dominique is the little seed that will have Harry and Ginny starting a family?

You know, I like how your Malfoy is coming out. Still the little ferret but yet you can see the maturity he went through after the war. I wonder how he'll meet Astoria (if you're following cannon all the way) and has Scorpius.

I was wondering; do you think it would be possible to post the next chapter on the 17th or would that be pushing your beta considering Christmas is around the corner?

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Damn, I wish the next chapter was coming out soon.

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Re: Review serendipity_50 December 10 2012, 11:47:58 UTC
My plan is to post the final chapter and the epilogue on Christmas. Glad you enjoyed the chapter. Hope the next one answers all your questions.

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Almost there lizzypotter14 December 10 2012, 14:29:18 UTC
Wow! Malfoy, the voice of wisdom and patience? I love how you played his character. Malfoy grew up in an environment were prejudice, avarice, and pride were very much an every day occurrence. It is true that we can change our paths but it takes a strong individual to accomplish that. Better late than never.

Ginny's realizations of Harry's true self were long overdue. In order for you to love someone, you have to understand what made them thick and our girl lost sight of it in the many turns that her life took. Now, she just need to reel up her demons and confess, in a simple statement what she has just figure out: that she loves Harry just the way he is: selfish, loving, and with a deep sense of justice and forgiveness.

The end is near and I find myself like a kid that knows there is a treat waiting for him or her at home: I want it all and I want it now.

Waiting, not so patiently, for the end of my beloved story to come.

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Re: Almost there serendipity_50 December 11 2012, 23:59:16 UTC
I'd like to think that Malfoy would grow up some after all he's been through, especially now that he's out from under his father's influence. And Ginny's finally making it through her long dark tunnel, too. It's been fun writing their progress. Thanks for coming along for the ride.

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girlspell December 10 2012, 23:08:46 UTC
Weasley Benched for Banging Savior

Best line in the story.

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serendipity_50 December 11 2012, 23:59:50 UTC
:-)

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Banging Saviors and Wise Ferrets willit14 December 11 2012, 02:53:47 UTC
Oh dear me.... you have me on a cusp and leave me breathless and speechless.
Two weeks to finish.... *sigh*
The impatient fangirl is whining, but the writer and author understands. This close to finish and it needs to be crafted to perfection.

I eagerly await your grand finale.

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Re: Banging Saviors and Wise Ferrets serendipity_50 December 12 2012, 00:01:12 UTC
Thanks! I hope it'll be the perfect Christmas gift (or any other holiday you might be celebrating).

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Oh wow ciscochic December 11 2012, 05:05:20 UTC
First I have to say GO GINNY!!!~!~!~ And then I almost start to feel sorry for Harry for the amount of he11 Ginny is going to give him from hiding this from her. ...And then I go back to wondering how this is all going to get fixed in only one more chapter. :-0 It certainly can't be as simple as a 'finite incatatem' can it?

And Thank You Malfoy for finally talking some sense into Harry. I knew that's what he was thinking (the self-AK). I can kindof understand his reasons, but it still seems like such a cowardly way to go, especially without talking with his "family" first.

You know... the world is supposed to end on 12/21/12 -- according to the Mayans, at least, so it would be perfectly understandable if you wanted to post the final chapters BEFORE Christmas. No, really -- we would all understand :-)

Another wonderful (if simultaneously agonizing) cliffhanger! Can't wait for the rest!

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Re: Oh wow serendipity_50 December 12 2012, 00:04:37 UTC
No, finite incatatem won't do it. But, trust me, it'll all work out in the end. Sorry, but I'll be traveling on the 21st, so the 25th it'll have to be. Glad you liked the chapter. Thanks for the kind words.

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