so the jacket was a good movie.

[sernegativity]

so she calls out of the blue. los vegas at first, but unsuccessfully. shes leaving soon, to la forever, and she wants to talk. coffee. my cars dead so i skate. we talk. she says shes a bitch and that shes sorry. i accept only the apology, and its all good. she still smokes turkish gold. normally the smell would make me dry-heave, but not with her.

Comments

longer sentences anyone?

[anonymous]

it would've been better if you had written:
"now she is all but gone ... but the smoke still lingers"

c'mon now. if we're going to try and be artsy. do it with style.

Re: longer sentences anyone?

[sernegativity]

im going to make an executive decision here, and not take your input, mr. and/or ms. anonymous. because, quite simply, "we're" not trying to be artsy.(mostly because its not a real word) i am already in-fact, an artist. an artist who makes rather decent money just being arty, all day long. if i was looking for creative input, i would turn to one of my many real artist friends, not an anonymous internet lurker.
so please, take your 2 yen back, their the wrong currency. if i need help with style, ill give you a call. after all, whats more stylish than hiding behind internet anonymity?

on second thought, get the fuck out of my office. this interview is over. what kind of moron confuses a personal recollection of events with art?